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Lil AJ Vs. Da MaGiCiAn 7
I'll spit first
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iight u spit first even doe u told me 2 iight no changin it now u spit first iight heres da rules IIIGHT!
No hate votes no crew votes no dick ridin votes no unexplained votes no feedin or bitin... 8-20 lines iight ~1~ u spit first check in neway |
Man how u gonna tell me how i write my rhymes
I write my rhymes like any other fucker Want ya to know that Im about to change over Cuz tha game is about to be over It's about time that u had a make over If u come my way thats how u get fucked up So shut up and spit some rhymes I think I made my lines clear But I still demand some respect Cuz im tha one who that set it up Im about to set it off So go off and spit ur rhymes hoe Lil AJ |
LMAO!!! iight good shit lil man elevate doe HEres ma shit
U might not be a BLunt but imma leave u smoked... I cant beleive im battlin dis LIL A[B/]SS [BJOKE... Wack emcee wut kinda name is lil AJ?... ya flow aint even Elementry..nigga its Pre-K... Nigga u fuckin suck why da fuck u battlin me... talk shit nigga u gon get Claped in da Knee.... you wont be able to walk but its dont matta... didnt ya motha eva tell u to hold ya blatta.... I am wut i eat so i'll keep from eatin dis wannabe Mc.... If he spit victory in his whole verse n i stayed quiet u still cudnt beat me...(Stretched) u a wanna be mc u,..see letters? u shud eat 2...(M & C) If u was battlin da cat n da hat he cud prolly beat u... heres a decent line cuz i jus felt like spitin suntin decent lmao.... I hate ya flow it makes me wanna bash ya head in.... u got a 'Old School' 'flow' like a 'Wave' of nba 'Legends'....(derre its ova) |
I made a mistake heres da redu ma fizzault lmao iight ~1~
LMAO!!! iight good shit lil man elevate doe HEres ma shit U might not be a BLunt but imma leave u smoked... I cant beleive im battlin dis LIL [ASS JOKE... Wack emcee wut kinda name is lil AJ?... ya flow aint even Elementry..nigga its Pre-K... Nigga u fuckin suck why da fuck u battlin me... talk shit nigga u gon get Claped in da Knee.... you wont be able to walk but its dont matta... didnt ya motha eva tell u to hold ya blatta.... I am wut i eat so i'll keep from eatin dis wannabe Mc.... If he spit victory in his whole verse n i stayed quiet u still cudnt beat me...(Stretched) u a wanna be mc u,..see letters? u shud eat 2...(M & C) If u was battlin da cat n da hat he cud prolly beat u... heres a decent line cuz i jus felt like spitin suntin decent lmao.... I hate ya flow it makes me wanna bash ya head in.... u got a 'Old School' 'flow' like a 'Wave' of nba 'Legends'....(derre its ova) |
iight da lil ass joke thingy is for LIL.A.J. iight u get it if u dont ~1~ b
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haha this was weak
lil aj-ur flow was elementary,as was ur structure ur punches,well there were none,plus u recycled u had no personals.....and u need to elevate or just quit rap while u can no hate da magician-ur punches hit harder,u had good flow.i didnt really like ur structure though u had a couple personals....but u basically take this battle in every categorie so v/da magician 7 |
good look yo...Man i didnt even try dat was like a 5 minute keystyle...
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Lil AJ: played stuff, couldnt see any punches.. gotta elevate man... work on flow first and punches after that. Make all your words rhyme, dont just put random stuff in, it has to roll off the tongue right... dont quit rap man, just improve, its all prac., head to the cyphers.
Magician: lil bit of wordplay lil bit of personal stuff. Your at the level where you need to make your flow more complex, and mature a little.. im not disrespecting you or anything though. use multis and innners to get your flow sounding ill, and what i meant by mature was drop that gangsta thing.. like all the "nigga" and that in your rhymes... you could if you were freestyling and u were actually a gangsta.. then the audience could see, but on the net its kind of "try hard", especially if you're white.. how often do you see em say nigga?? pretty much never.. but even if you are black its still pretty lame. my vote: Magician could you guys return the favour?? need some votes on this battle: http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...d.php?p=1339183 |
look son i said earlier in da thread...I didnt try at all...i was watchin t.v. when i was spittin dis sh1t im serious iight ~1~ and i said 'nigga' 3 times
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lmao
:laugh2: omg! lil aj is tha worst rappa on tha planet. it didnt even rhyme tha whole thing was horrible, the best part was when you ended it lol. da magician took it all.
my vote goes to him vote on my battle i did wit bigpimpn, return tha favor, an im not sayn vote for me, jus keep it real. |
yeah like ma man posion said lil aj elevate big time magican took this
vote magican now i voted here so go vote on me and canopy's battle and mine wit aj i will return tha favor |
hey lil flip
Want ya to know that Im about to change over Cuz tha game is about to be over It's about time that u had a make over doo lil aj ur a biter thas from lil flip hoe... vote other guy ohh and hey lil aj are u gonna except my challenge or what? if u a real rapper u would..lol wut a kid better except or else ur a puss |
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