FallingAngel2k4 vs CaliCollegeGurl
 

10 lines
I spit first
No feeding
No d/r
No hate
No crew
No b/s
I get 10 min
You get 15

As I grab the glock, put it to your headpiece
One in the chamber, the safety is off release//
Straight at your dome homes, I wanna see cabbage
Angel iz the savage, doin your brain cells much damage//
Nigga 45, ozzie glock, 18, call the shots Hesistate, I think not, nigga my fire gone stay hot//
You really want it wit me betta back down cuz when city in ya town it'z about 2 go down//
Sittin there runnin off at da mouf 2 shots from da 45 will clear dat shit out//
I can't believe da nerve of dis guy thinkin he hot shit until i let off da clip//
I'll have ya like da kids on da milk carton missin in action//
I'll have ya fucked up at ya funeral wit a closed casket have ya moms in ICU askin wut happened//

Ummm, I get the impression you pre-wrote but I aint trippin:

Angels is that a halo or just your head spinnin
As I lyrically decapitate you--leave you no chance of winnin
The verdict, my diction shows you're a di*k son
For trying to battle Cali's lyrical addiction.
Is that your face or your ass cuz you talk alot of sh**
But your pre-written flows show you're just illiterate
Your rhymes are elementary like doin it missionary
Did you copy verbs verbatum from the rhyming dictionary?
Plus ya ugly asked ya mom's "Miss why'd you do that"
She said, "oops i forgot to flush what I shat"
How did I talk to ya moms? It's no riddle
Cuz I talk to dogs too call me Dr Doolittle.

...off the top; try and fuq w/me

Alright, uppin for votes here. And I'm not saying FallingAngel2k4 pre-wrote, but if YOU think he did then vote accordingly.

cali took this battle...she had a real battle verse with personals and punches.....fallings verse was more of a cypher verse, talkin about guns and shyt...not going directly at the opponent..u cant win without a real battle verse
vote=cali

Cali: ima give you this one cuz ya structure was betta and ya punches hit harder. Ya flow went more

Fallen: Work on ya punches ya flow cuz some of ya shit made no sence. You can tell it was pre-written cuz you said this guy and you battlin a girl.

return the favor for me
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129243

punches:cali
flow:cali
wordplay:none
structure:cali
personals:both
overall:cali

aight in my eyes cali took this battle on one factor, she threw more punches than angel and the ones she threw hit pretty hard. good battle by both of you and cali i doubt angel pre wrote but what it comes down to is punches and personals and cali takes it. gurl for a newbie that shit wasnt bad at all, i see some mad potential with you. keep up to good work cali.

VOTE- CALI

both verses were pretty bad, they lacked punches, wordplay, metas, everything, cali's had a bit of a better structure which helped the flow and was a bit more consistant in the verse so thats what got my vote