lil shit Vs. Street Legend
 

aight

Man who is this dude, he's so weird like ice cube
All he do is loce around, comin up wit some fake ass rhymes all tha time
Look, I see tha fury in ur eyes which u heard from my name
Plus I got this thang that'll rock ur brain
So don't get bitchy when I get at ur name
And take one for tha team dang recognize tha game
It ain't tha same when I drop ur ass
I'm on top, u gotta find me
G-Unit tha best kind, they're off tha chain all tha time
They're tha best in tha game
So don't go insane, cuz I tapped ur cab.
Mighta add that tha dope was great
If u wanna get beserk
Start some shit and I'll lay ur punk ass down
Not down to dis
It's about who has tha best rhymes all tha time
So spit out ur lines or ur damn rhymes
Cuz I be pimpin, since I been pimpin pimpin pimpin pimpin when I was pimpin
Don't get it then zip it kid

yo check this you lil bitch

Dont be encouraged by my record you bitch//
Im still nice It's Street Legend out to murder this "lil shit"//
I dont wanna find out this nigga is ridin g-unit dick//
you usin 50 rhymes but we usin clips//
Dawg, before steppin to me work on ya rhyme scheme//
With the eye beam, Ill leave this coward out to dry clean//
I dont even kno why this nigga tried me//
Cuz more then likely, he gonna get k.o'ed like a vitcim of Ali//
Why you talkin bout all this pimpin like you book whores//
Cuz if you stunt my niggas rob you, thats what my crooks for//
When the votes come in, you headin for 0 and 1//
Its gonna be like im teein off wit you, hole in one!//

uppin............... 1

lil shit was you joking forreal: even if S.L. is weak(not saying you were you was better on this on) he merked you ass so bad you should never rap again.
Lil shit tell me what this style is:
Man who is this dude, he's so weird like ice cube
All he do is loce around, comin up wit some fake ass rhymes all tha time
Look, I see tha fury in ur eyes which u heard from my name
Plus I got this thang that'll rock ur brain
So don't get bitchy when I get at ur name
And take one for tha team dang recognize tha game(only part that ryhmeed)
It ain't tha same when I drop ur ass
I'm on top, u gotta find me
G-Unit tha best kind, they're off tha chain all tha time
They're tha best in tha game
So don't go insane, cuz I tapped ur cab.
Mighta add that tha dope was great
If u wanna get beserk
Start some shit and I'll lay ur punk ass down
Not down to dis
It's about who has tha best rhymes all tha time
So spit out ur lines or ur damn rhymes
Cuz I be pimpin, since I been pimpin pimpin pimpin pimpin when I was pimpin
Don't get it then zip it kid
Oh i get it you name is lil shit and your rap is big shit very nice
vote is definally S.L.

Man who is this dude, he's so weird like ice cube
All he do is loce around, comin up wit some fake ass rhymes all tha time
Look, I see tha fury in ur eyes which u heard from my name
Plus I got this thang that'll rock ur brain
So don't get bitchy when I get at ur name
And take one for tha team dang recognize tha game
It ain't tha same when I drop ur ass

^^ 1st line was wack...how are ice cubes weird?


Work on evening out lines and using more complex, less wack punches/metas


Dont be encouraged by my record you bitch//
Im still nice It's Street Legend out to murder this "lil shit"//
I dont wanna find out this nigga is ridin g-unit dick//
you usin 50 rhymes but we usin clips//
Dawg, before steppin to me work on ya rhyme scheme//

^^ 1st 2 lines win this battle for you

Elevate on metas and vocab


Vote: SL

Um, Lil Shit baby. You gotta keep in mind that the 1st and last line of your battle are the most important...and your battle needs 2 rhyme at just about all points. So, since you slipped up on those two point I pretty much have no choice but to give this to Street Legend.

Keep uppin y'all.

uppin...................

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My vote goes to streat legend his punches hit hard and his flow was very smooth

What the hell.........
 

Man is u serious, Lil Shit :laugh: U need to scrap the rhymes youve been workin wit and start over baby. U had no rhyme structure whatsoever. Weak punches, ridin G-Unit Dick, this rhyme is all u baby. No disrespect though.
It ain't tha same when I drop ur ass
I'm on top, u gotta find me
Shit jus didnt make sense. dont know what u were going for here.
G-Unit tha best kind, they're off tha chain all tha time
They're tha best in tha game
Ride that G-Unit Dick kid. :nono:

So don't go insane, cuz I tapped ur cab.
Mighta add that tha dope was great
Who's dope, what dope, I got lost.

My bad forgot about Street
 

My bad forgot about Street, Yo shit flowed and stayed on topic
Dont be encouraged by my record you bitch//
Im still nice It's Street Legend out to murder this "lil shit"//---Nice Opener

Street wins this by a Mercy Rule.
Vote to: Street Legend

S.L. got my vote, better punchlines, better vocab, and was just all around better, ya know? arite hey do me a favor n hit this battle up for me n vote honestly,
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129819
arite thx everybody, peace.