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.::* Tha Untouchable Vs. Christinite *::.
10-14 linez
no crew or dickridin votez ...u spit first |
lets get this show on the road, i don't know what you've been told,
you call yourself tha untouchable, yeah right, i'll k.o. you in this fight, hit for hit, punch for punch, i'll knock your fronts out before lunch, you might think this will be an easy bout, fool you don't know what i'm about, i come spreadin the good news through hip-hop, and man you really need to stop, you ain't got nothin from what i see, and to tell you plainly you ain't no mc, haven't read anythin you've written down, but i'm pretty sure its wack, the news is spreadin around, i'm comin faster and stronger, tha untouchable in untouchable no longer, i'll keep on spittin rhymes while you shake your rattle, cause i started and am endin this battle, so you go ahead and try to spit some rhymes, and i'll run some circles around you 7000 more times. |
this kid christian comin up 2 me like i'm his fuckin brother or his mother u a weak mc who got limpz in his rhymez, bet u every time u say a line u stutter my first battle in like 200 postz, and i had to waste it on sumone that iz wack c'mon kid, u so pussy i would think i'm battlin a kitty cat i'm az hott right now az rza back in hiz wu-tang production dayz and i spit rhymez like i'm sick at u, this ain't even bulletz and u dodgin in craze christian iz to corny az nipple xposin iz to janet'z breast kill u slow like a fox to a rabbit, and slower than 56k internet u az fruity az a "tropical fantasy" that i'm holdin in my hand my style be az stylish as famous name brandz, and i wanna fuck u up so bad just like tha next man sorry if this paragraph ain't good but i hadn't battled for a month r.i.p. christianite, he'z gonna sleep with tha fishez and until i win he'z stayin in my trunk. |
this iz 1 of tha reazon'z i hardly battle, cauze no1 votez
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iight tha untouchable got dis one..better punches and flow
chris..ur structure and flow was off..barely any punches v/untouchable return da favor wit honest votes http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129293 |
i apreciate ya votez in any way, i'm uppin
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CHRISTIANITE-
lets get this show on the road, i don't know what you've been told, you call yourself tha untouchable, yeah right, i'll k.o. you in this fight, WEAK- NO SKILLS NOTHING BAR-.5 (FOR AT LEAST INSULTING) hit for hit, punch for punch, i'll knock your fronts out before lunch, you might think this will be an easy bout, fool you don't know what i'm about, BAD- KINDA MULIED THE FILLER- VERY WEAK-.5 i come spreadin the good news through hip-hop, and man you really need to stop, you ain't got nothin from what i see, and to tell you plainly you ain't no mc, MORE OF THE SAME-.5 haven't read anythin you've written down, but i'm pretty sure its wack, the news is spreadin around, i'm comin faster and stronger, tha untouchable in untouchable no longer, STILL NOTHING, ALMOST PUNCHED-1 i'll keep on spittin rhymes while you shake your rattle, cause i started and am endin this battle, FUNNY COZ A BABY PLAYS WITH A RATTLE, NO-0 so you go ahead and try to spit some rhymes, and i'll run some circles around you 7000 more times. SHOCKING-1 AWFUL RHYME STRUCTURE- READ SOME RAPS. TOUCHY- this kid christian comin up 2 me like i'm his fuckin brother or his mother u a weak mc who got limpz in his rhymez, bet u every time u say a line u stutter WEAK- BUT RHYMED WELL-2.5 my first battle in like 200 postz, and i had to waste it on sumone that iz wack c'mon kid, u so pussy i would think i'm battlin a kitty cat DAMN-SO WEAK, F*CKIN UNCREATIVE-1 (FOR PUNCHING) i'm az hott right now az rza back in hiz wu-tang production dayz and i spit rhymez like i'm sick at u, this ain't even bulletz and u dodgin in craze CONFUSIN- KINDA VILOENT-2 christian iz to corny az nipple xposin iz to janet'z breast kill u slow like a fox to a rabbit, and slower than 56k internet BETTER- BEST BAR IN THE BATTLE SO FAR-3.5 u az fruity az a "tropical fantasy" that i'm holdin in my hand my style be az stylish as famous name brandz, and i wanna fuck u up so bad just like tha next man STRECTCHED- WEAK- NOTHING:1 sorry if this paragraph ain't good but i hadn't battled for a month r.i.p. christianite, he'z gonna sleep with tha fishez and until i win he'z stayin in my trunk. AWFUL FILLER- BUT PUNCH AS OK-3 POOR VERSE MAN, NOT THAT U NEEDED 2 DO MUCH. VOTE- TOUCHY |
my vote goes to untouchable
because he had the only good line in this weak ass battle |
untouchable won tis battle....i could read his lyrics better and understand them...had a few better punches...............towards the end u strechd sum lines too far..
chris u had sum good hits in there but i think if you had shortened sum of those rhymes and and had a better structure u would have won............. http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130850 |
return da favor please honest votes...............
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Flow:U-need to work on it
Personals:None Creativity:none Multies:none Wordplay:none Punches:U Ok,that battle was kinda sucky to me.Neither have good for real.Both need to work on that.I wasn't feelin neither one of you that much,but my vote goes to Untouchable.Work on y'all spits. |
struc - untouch
flow - untouch punches - untouch you didnt really have any metaz or personals n the opener n closer were both weak v- untouchable drop a vote on this link http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134062 |
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