e-dubz vs. jefferson
 

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no crew,hate or d/r votes
no feedin
spit 15 mins from check in
u spit first

you forgot to mention no biting, so no feeding & no biting.... check

yea dats jus obvious..checkin in

to compete with me u gotta use extreme high velocities/
be prepared to spit to a hostile beat, slug flying high speed/
its like a chain reaction, the pain tacts in and my words rain reactive/
fuck around get your cranium smashed in, replace ur brain with shit cuz in fact its/
better for u to have shit for brains, than get verbally slain/
what bitch? aint heard of my name? you'll get hurt in a way/
theres a part of me that says fuck the harmony/
ill hit from a distance like connosieurs of archery/
im strapped with a gigantic armory, shouldnt have started beef/
you couldnt flow with a mic in your artories/

im so far ahead of u u cant see me wit a microscope
ur a newbie dont try to spit wit E i’ll leave u like scope
washed up and spit out, u got merked dats my feelin
da last time u had a fan it was spinnin on da ceilin
ur so played out i thought u was da old skool joint of da day
dats all i can say, i'll leave u wishin u knew how to spray
im nastier den wuts between lil kims legs b4 she started rappin
E all ova niggaz like a blanket, teachin yo girl how to get it slappin
u spittin rhymes causin da earth to freeze, please pack da burner
cuz u jus got beat worse den tina turner

iight lets get votes up in herre..holla

can we get some votes on this shit please?

uppin

Vote=E-dubz

That was a decent battle.I gave it to E-bubz for the fact he was actually rhyming,as with jefferson you didn't do that.That's a factor when battling.Do work on that jefferson.

uppin..

the star dont ever vote again.. his flow was nice... u just to simple minded to see it.. his verse ate e-dumbz.. no beef dub, but his vocab was nice, and his flow wasnt ur average normal joes.. feel me ? i might not be able to vote cause of my low posts,, i dont just post ne where... all of em have been cyphers... but back to the point, jefferson clearly won this...

jefferson- most of ya shit didn't rhyme but ya had an okay flow... tip to E-Dub i actually like the arrogance in ya flows but make you don't specialize in that... Good flow both you two...

E-Dubz took this one..

i dont see what you guys talkin bout when u say it didnt rhyme... but what ever... uppin

Hey yall niggas this battle was alright thats it for new guys to this shit it was str8 jefferson i see what u tryin to do wit ur different style but u gotta understand that u gotta get at the nigga u battlin and i didnt see that too much with E yo shit was good for a beginner ;but that last line has been played out dawg but your punches and structure were there so it goes to you...

I voted did you

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=115870

thanks fo da feedback..uppin