bigpimpn' vs *The~Star*
 

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No strecthing
No D/R votes please

bigpimpn' spiting first

if u say so

With a name like that you should get beat//
it'll be hard for a faggot like you to admit defeat//
but ya better get started//
cause like your name your retarted//
a bitch like you ain't got no game//
but all and all where both the same//
its just i'm good and your not//
your lame and i'm hot//
so lets just se u try and win at this//
lets see a pussy like u make better disses//

don't tell me u chicked out on me Star you need to spit

This boy don’t want ‘none’, he gone wish I wasn’t the one he ‘saw’
I’m ma leave him real ‘done’, I cook him nice & ‘raw’
You don’t wanna ‘play’ with me, I’ll leave ya ‘dead’
Once you ‘lay’ in ya coffin, remember it was ‘said’
You have no ‘skill’ so how can you come at me ‘real’
My words ‘kill’ ya, so you gotta receive the losing ‘deal’
You suck, so I’m launching ya azz to ‘Mars”
You can’t touch me, I kill, call me ‘Sars’
He shouldn’t have accepted ‘this’, cuz you bout to get ‘beat’
Consider this your ‘wish’, when I hammer you like ‘meat’

HoLLa BaCk

aight um drunk
 

bigpimpn' ya started aight
but den you fell off the wagon
and your close was unimpressive to say the least
krusty don't care how ya talk
ya still can't rhyme this with disses



Star closed hot on ya
:shoot:
you got shot

check out ma battles in ma sig an show some luv 2 either of us cats
people sleepin on em
dats why i'm votin and spendin da time


bigpimpin' i ain't hatin
i know i voted against ya twice but you got work ta do
you got some good shit i can tell
but you gotta set up better and definately
finish harder

peace

:cussing:

:cussing:

im just tryin to get my 20 post
 

that was tight i give it to star though .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ................................

i gotta go wit star cus pimp started slippn at tha end
this and disses do not rhyme.
elevate.

da closer won it fo star..she had betta punches and flow
pimpn' ur vocab has to b betta on short battles
v/star

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i got to go with start man that closing was a big punch for ya bigpimpin elevate more on ya punches vocab was not much there either work on that
vote-start

Can this battle get some votes?Uppin 4 peeps to peep dis

My vote....
 

My vote goes to The~Star. They came a little more harder than the other cat. Both did good keep it up!

im goivin 2 star for better punches and structure and more complexity she needs 2 work on personals vocab and multis
big pimpin work on vocab personals multis
good battle keep droppin

aight star im votin for u. u both need to work on punches those lines were really weak jus elevate on punches and star is getin my vote only becaus he had a better structure and flow

v/star
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