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im tired of cats unda estamatin tha skill, how many times i gotta tell ya i don take you hataz fa real//
ya like laffy taffys an i put a joke on each rappa, most of em aint real, jus choke artists an weak actors//
they aint from tha streets they don really do wut they say, they aint holdn heat an they aint ready fa no real gun play//
listen, i aint tha best, but i damn sho aint tha worst, lil aj took that theory when he wrote his first verse//
im gettin betta ery day of tha week, my rhymes is infinte an my styles very unique//

POISON^^^^



VIP here we go

a gangsta is a name that i can claim/
from all tha snitchin murder and pain/
i'm gonna take tha world by storm/
thought i was dead i'm back in tha phisical form/
ive witnessed tha bodies just drop/
ive made tha barrels just pop pop/
u can feel in my rhymes tha passion/
me and poison are lyrical assasins/
maken bodies fade like bad fashions/
so take are bullets in large rashins/

ayo my bad i had to battle bigpimpn real quick

elevate aight home bois...holla at my open mic..."ruff tymez"Pt2 aight be e.z wun

wut chu think we tryna do ery day elevate home boi, but if you check out my battle ill check out urs.

not ya battle but the shit ya wrote prt.2

but ye elevate but ya got some potential aight be ez wun...

ight pc

dis isnt good...evalute...needs alot of work on advacnes skills...too simple bois...try gen...but nice try .....stay up..no beef

good flow
but u need 2 get more complexed the 2nd verse lines need 2 b longer and add more vocab
pretty good keep droppin

thanx to who ever gave a compliment, but if you aint gon give advice, don write shit in here.