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LAT 06-12-04 10:30 AM

Conversation Wit Da UnBorn Child *FeedBack Please*
 
Conversation Wit Da Unborn Child

Bold:Mother
Italicized:Child


What Is Dat Noise I Hear From Da Womb?


Terror And Destruction Spellin Your Doom
A World Full Of Hate In Front Of U Looms
A World OverCrowded There's No Room
Let Me Stick Dis Needle In Seal Ya Tomb
Ain't Nothin Good In Dis World For You
It's A Horrible Place To Be Born Into
If I Don't Carry On Wit Dis I'd Be A Fool



But I'll Never Get To Do What You Did
First Breath Of Air I'll Never Get
That Camp Fire I Never Lit
Dat Pussy That I Never Licked
Dat Niggas Ass I Never Kicked
That Broke Down Car I Never Fixed
Dat Wife And Kids I Coulda Had
Never Tryin My Hand At Bein A Dad
All That Worry I Ain't Even Born Yet



I See Where U Comin From I See
But If U Were Born I Couldn't Let Dat Be
Ya Fathers Gone And I'm Only Sixteen
Ya GrandMother A Fuckin Crack Fiend
Ya GrandFather Died 1993
So Who Does Dat Leave For U? Me.



Dat's All I Need Is My Mother For Real
In The Case Of Birth Dad's Ain't Part Of Da Deal
Your Gonna Kill Me How Does That Feel?
Maybe I'll Grow Up And Help U
A New Car And a New House Too
Put Down That Needle Dat's All U Have To Do



I Can't Do Dis I Can't Try
And See Ya Life Fail Right Before My Eyes
So the Decision Is U Must Die..................................



*News Bulletin* A Sixteen Year Old Female Was Found Dead Earlier Dis Evenin.
It Appears She Shot Herself In The Head. It Was A Suicide. Autopsy Shows
That She Apparently Had An Abortion Prior To Her Death.*********



That Chick Ain't Have To Pull The Trigger
Damn I Wonder Why Da Urge Hit Her
What Was Dat Name Again I Wonder
Cause It Kinda Sounds Familiar
Was It Someone I Knew Maybe
Hold Up It Was.......... DAMN It Was Me..............

J Gutta 06-12-04 10:58 AM

dat is nice yo keep doin tha damn thang..holla at my open mic called"ruff tymez"Pt2 aight be easy wun...

Willa 06-12-04 12:27 PM

damn that was ill ur tight
keep doin ya thing
r u a guy or gurl?

LAT 06-12-04 12:43 PM

Thanx For Da Feed I'm A Gurl

Willa 06-12-04 05:19 PM

tight im a gurl 2
maybe we should hook up on a collab

LAT 06-12-04 06:35 PM

Yeah well holla at me whenever bout that

For$akeN 06-12-04 08:04 PM

damn....that was str8 I was feeling everything in there nice topic
to write about too keep dropping.......big up to you

LAT 06-12-04 10:34 PM

thanx uppin fa more feed please

LAT 06-13-04 06:22 PM

Can I Get More Feed Pleaze

LAT 06-14-04 10:34 AM

Upppppppppppppiiiinnnnnn fa more feed back pleaz

Tzr 06-14-04 10:48 PM

From one who was a child not fully prepared for -or- mutually wanted........ "B-I-T-C-H-I-N-A-S-S E-X-C-E-L-E-N-T!

Country 06-14-04 10:58 PM

nice shit lat. smooth flow, no real multies, decent words. nice. holla

Tzr 06-15-04 01:00 PM

Op Please
 
Op Please?

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129756

Thanks LAT

MaCLuNiTiC 06-15-04 01:59 PM

it was good yo, keep it comin, i like it. arite peace.


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