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Ill - Legal Juniors
Rated - Leader Aka Best Junior.
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If your a newbie or someone who is not uterly wack i will take you under my wing & help you get better . . Just post me a link.

wot do u mean?

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LoL - what do you mean what do I mean ?!?!?

It's a crew tryout thread.

Upin

lol aiight aiight...im finna tryout for this..each crew needs a hot newb (wont be a newb for long..) but check this....

Ive Been Hot For A while..you been rappin for 4 years..and still wack...
Like michael jackson..burn your face off..and ask you, are you still black?...
I don't want to waste my rhymes in this tryout..so imma say it like this...
I Insist..you slit your wrist..cuz im tired of hearin your voice like cannibus...
Wire Your mouth Shut and ask you if you knew who you was talkin too..
Leavin trails of lava..as u melt imma ask you..who u think u walkin through.
Its Game over put the controller down..and My Rhymes Too....
Get out of my House..ill show you the door and my Nine Too...


freestyled that in about 5..wat u think

Ive Been Hot For A while..you been rappin for 4 years..and still wack...
Like michael jackson..burn your face off..and ask you, are you still black?...
Wack . . no potential .
I don't want to waste my rhymes in this tryout..so imma say it like this...
I Insist..you slit your wrist..cuz im tired of hearin your voice like cannibus...
Filler who cares about hearing you voice like cannibus
Wire Your mouth Shut and ask you if you knew who you was talkin too..
Leavin trails of lava..as u melt imma ask you..who u think u walkin through.
Nope . .wack
Its Game over put the controller down..and My Rhymes Too....
Get out of my House..ill show you the door and my Nine Too...
Nah that's realy wack kid

Your really not good . . I'm not even sure i want you in junior's come back with a link when you have beaten someone.

so am i in or..waz gwan?

cause that was 5 mins i didnt put my best effort...so ..do i gotta elevate or wat?

A Punch line is what finshes your last line out of your verse to make what you said before make sense . . and usally witty or a hard disss

Your verses were full of fillers & disses were not played but dint make sense liek the canibus line.

[I'll tell you what - Rock
Ill - Legal Juniors < in ya sig.

& we'll have a training program get you to battle to each other and get better . .

word word i feel you...here imma do this jus' cause im bored..lol..imma try in this one i guess....

Rhymes'll Hit you So High..You Could stick your tongue out at left eye...
Your Rhymes Are unsteardy, Reload the nine and Pop You In ya left thigh...
My Rhymes Is "ill" Legal?..Naww I murder Kids For A Livin...
Rip out your ribs..and stuff you like a turkey on thanksgivin...
walkin' with sickness..so every time i touch someone they guaranteed to die..
Like Ali Vs Mini mee....in this match...i dont even have to try...

Sup Skriptz...If You Interested I'm Free....What Dis Crew Gone Be Like?

~R~

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I told you on aim . .


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Rhymes'll Hit you So High..You Could stick your tongue out at left eye...
Your Rhymes Are unsteardy, Reload the nine and Pop You In ya left thigh...

It's still a filler . . Your not making a point at the end of the 2nd line

Check this . . Example..

Your girl's a local whore & i'm always popping them bra's.
And she's got a comunity chest . . like monoply cards . .

If you've played monoply you will know what community chest is . .
It's also trying to say .. the comunity all have a go with your girl's chest/brest..
Thats wordplay & a punch because the monoply cards explain's & make the wordplay kick in.. & it make it a witty punch

But if i was you & said

And she's got a community chest.. Im always hitting the bitch

It would be a filler it doesnt finsh the joke or sentence or diss you get it no wordplay found.

Yepp thanks soul Skriptz, Im up in hurr

Oh Great...More Wackness LMAO...

Aiyo Looking At Getting Peeps In Hurr..

~R~

^^^

naah he aint wack he just need's to elevate a bit more & i'm gonna help him
so just squash the beef for now . .