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magnet vs killacamflow
freestyle against me naw u at a low peak
u cant compete probely hit puberty last week i aint even trippen tho cause u doin too much slippen dont act naughty scottie unless your last name is pippen i'm a true girls love me like crazy how can your name be killer when like to run around in daisy you kinda lazy yo words dont faze me i got 99 problems you aint one like jay-z i'm a rookie on to this rap battle i'm high on a kings thrown u just on a horses sattle reddot cant beat me tell dat boy he just a pet thats my little pet donkey like on dat movie shrek I kept my rymes clean with out one curse word but still my flows continue to drop like turds i make u sick throw up in my doggy sack get you some new rymes and please come back |
Urm fam u gottra kinda set up the rules..but i guess il do
Verse due 3 hrs...from now....i gotta go to the store....so 3hs...3-0ko let go |
Fam how u gonan drop a verse u already used come on now.....it was prewritten and u already used it?
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I bring to much weight for ya to carry they feeling Bricks/
Ya bring ya wack set of nigga im coming groups and Packs// Im came to be Murderous..my style is Ghetto Have you Heard of This// Well im gonna role u up and smoke ur ass like CaniBus// Fam ya scared of me ripping you on this match wit my Flow// Only way ur gonna beat me is if u hit me wit a Low Blow// Battlin someone nice and everyone knows your gonna lose jus face it// Either way ill put the steel to ya mouth and i aint talking bout braces// |
u thought the world was flat..come at you in full and you'll return as half//
U couldnt make me laugh cuz ya verses make no sense like inverted math// I bring to much weight for ya to carry they feeling Bricks/ Ya bring ya wack set of nigga im coming groups and Packs// Im came to be Murderous..my style is Ghetto Have you Heard of This// Well im gonna role u up and smoke ur ass like CaniBus// Fam ya scared of me ripping you on this match wit my Flow// Only way ur gonna beat me is if u hit me wit a Low Blow// Battlin someone nice and everyone knows your gonna lose jus face it// Either way ill put the steel to ya mouth and i aint talking bout braces// Left ou thsi rhyme |
magnet your verse was pretty weak...you talked about yourself moree than your opponent and thats the first reason you lost...you also lost cuz your verse was way too simplistic...that was a rap from someone with a mindstate of a 5 year old it was pretty weak...you didnt have any hard punches and no personals your verse was just bad and you need to elevate in all areas
overall : 3/10 killacam... i think your opener and closer was the hottest bars in this battle...canibus line was good,....your 2nd bar didnt rhyme tho ....bricks...packs...dont think it rhymes...u had a couple hard punches no personals decent structure and flow nice verse overall overall : 7/10 vote: killacamflow ~!1!~ |
Oh ya i did not add in the last part of the rhyme maybe ill do my whlole verse next time lol :) hmmm
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Okay...Really a one sided battle....Magnet your verse wasnt good...your punches really didnt even hit hard...and you pretty much prolly didnt even know what you were doing but you dropped decent but it wasnt all dat good.....KillaCam...verse was decent but usually you come way better then that but you went easy on the kid...and your punches were way better too...So overall Killa gets my vote for better punches and verse.....
V/KillaCam |
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killa gotz my vote, just cause other dudes punchs wernt effective, and killa had some good punchs'. i justl iked killas flow better, u KNOW? PEace!
I will post my vote when yall vote here tho. http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129719 |
Magnet-Your verses was too strethched and your
verse would have been hot if you would have add like similies or metaphores and also personals or multies Im telling you they would have been hot if you would have but some of them in there KillaCamflow-Easy but came aight, You beat him becuz you verse wasnt stretched and you hit harder punches then him but they was kindof low v/KCF |
red dot cant fase me?? whats that shit?? but anyway no hate.. i think killa definitly gets this magnet has elementary lines.. killa better punches and flow you take this battle
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