Poison v. *The~Star*
 

10 lines aka 5 bars
no crew or hate votes
lets do it

listen
 

star thinks he's hot, i dunno who sparked his flame, they need to tell em tha truth he aint even hot as his name//
i bet chu was raised by wemon, gay uncles an hermaphrodites, if all da lyricists in tha world taught u how to spit u still wouldnt be tight//
ima bout to end yo stardom an wipe tha tears from ya face, take ya fathers roll an say stay in a childs place//
ya like my student an im tha teacher givin a lesson, star don fuck wit poison or you will need a spiritual blessin//
tha bottom line is, ya thought this battle would be easy, ya like a blind kid cuz youll neva be able to see me//

im done

uppin for votes

Just let u know,I'm a female.OK,here we go....

+I do this ‘dude’ bad, treat him like he had ‘detention’/
Treat him so ‘rude’, you wouldn’t wanna ‘mention’+
+Don’t take ‘long’ for me to get in his ‘mind’/
So he wanna ‘prolong’ the battle, cuz he know the win ‘mine’+
+’Cold-hearted’, I’ll leave you in a puddle of blood’/
‘Retarded’, you’ll try to play in it like was ‘mud’+
+Stop trying to touch the ‘crown’ of being on my level/
But you gone be ‘drowned’ to reach yo level+ (ha)
+I ain’t gotta spit ‘flames’ against ‘lames’ to show my ‘name’
I’m the one to play the ‘games’, cause ‘shame’, bury ya ‘fame’+

o my bad i didnt kno i thought you was a dude lol

still uppin for votes

uppin fa votes

come on niggas vote
show us both love

POISON-
star thinks he's hot, i dunno who sparked his flame,
they need to tell em tha truth he aint even hot as his name//
WEAK- 2
i bet chu was raised by wemon, gay uncles an hermaphrodites,
if all da lyricists in tha world taught u how to spit u still wouldnt be tight//
MORE WEAKNESS- 2
ima bout to end yo stardom an wipe tha tears from ya face,
take ya fathers roll an say stay in a childs place//
ALMOST PUNCHED- 2.5
ya like my student an im tha teacher givin a lesson,
star don fuck wit poison or you will need a spiritual blessin//
WEAK-2
tha bottom line is, ya thought this battle would be easy,
ya like a blind kid cuz youll neva be able to see me//
WEAK-2
POOR VERSE- ELEVATE MAN.

STAR-
+I do this ‘dude’ bad, treat him like he had ‘detention’/
Treat him so ‘rude’, you wouldn’t wanna ‘mention’+
WEAK- 2
+Don’t take ‘long’ for me to get in his ‘mind’/
So he wanna ‘prolong’ the battle, cuz he know the win ‘mine’+
ALMOST A PUNCH- 2.5
+’Cold-hearted’, I’ll leave you in a puddle of blood’/
‘Retarded’, you’ll try to play in it like was ‘mud’+
MEH, WEAK- 3
+Stop trying to touch the ‘crown’ of being on my level/
But you gone be ‘drowned’ to reach yo level+ (ha)
BETTER- 3.5
+I ain’t gotta spit ‘flames’ against ‘lames’ to show my ‘name’
I’m the one to play the ‘games’, cause ‘shame’, bury ya ‘fame’+
MEH- THATS A POOR MULTIE FLOW- 3
STAR TAKES THIS.
POOR BATTLE

Come on People


We Need some Votes


It would be nice

im ashamed of my self cuz i kno i coulda did WAY better, i wouldn be suprised if star won. but we need votes so vote

yo star got this 1 she came out hittin like muhhamid ali and landed i would say on the letterman card all punches

poison came out kinda wack wasnt really tryin it seems
v/thestar

I ain’t gotta spit ‘flames’ against ‘lames’ to show my ‘name’
I’m the one to play the ‘games’, cause ‘shame’, bury ya ‘fame’+ like that line by da way

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We need some more votes.

Won't take long.

I'll return the favor,just leave links

Holla back

Posion gets my vote his punches hit harder and his flow was smooth.

uppin for votes look Belowv

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W e n e e d v o t e s

They need to be nice explained votes.

DAMN,I wish you assholes would stop sleeping and hit dis battle up ya dig.