TheOne vs. KronicK
 

aight, no d/r crew or hate votez
10-12 linez max
spit 10minz afta chek in
peace

In
 

look:::

You scared to bust, Im droppin science and u bout to get crushed, plus u not on my level aint no comparing us/
U stare and hush, u already lost dont get teared and cut, cuz if wackness had a sense of 'humor' ya rhymes is hilarious//

Is own folks claim theres no hope for him now...its like the 'cricus is on fire' the way Im 'burnin dis clown'/
Explodin da rounds, leave u in a hole in da ground, my spit will 'scorch ya' so u could really be the 'toast of the town'//

My flow must gotta 'soft touch', or more rush, cuz it gets 'felt the most'/
u aint gangsta, hoe left u broke, u like 'burnt bread' and 'blackjack' never 'dealt with toast'//

Whats worse...I 'kill the competition' like the 'hustlers slogan', TheONe 'cant touch me' like a 'hot pot' when da 'handles broken'/
U can tell I'm killing this gay, cuz he wouldn't be 'fitted for A's' if he was 'managing Oakland'//

Homie ya luck's dry....cuz when u mess wit 'Kronick' Il leave ya 'lungs dry'/
Like Hov said...NoONe must try, cuz it dont matta if u 'JetLI', 'Romeo must Die'//

aight quick key 4 ya.....uppin ya verse....partna

Aight chek it

First i ain't skared of no suka ass wanna be
I'm gonna make u notice that i, yes me
Kan be a lyrical genius, an leave u in the dust
Man ur ol newz, like..yesterdayz, ur startin to rust
But wen ur gettin so much of a challenge frum every1 like me, u kan't keep up
So u stay in ur lil town elevatin gain, while i'm on commercialz wid ma close up
Fo ma new brand a shoez comin out, C-tRiP addition, sweet
Here, i'll toss ya a pair, ther neat eh? ma lil treat
Now go bak to bein the nobody u r boy! keep tryin
Keep thinkin u kan touch thiz, or any of uz, ur lyin
To ur self an u no it, it doesn't even have to be said
So knowin thiz we shoot u in the head an see the red no doubt u dead!!

:thumbup: i liked thiz one now letz get sum feedbak an i don't kare if i win, leave honest feedbak ppl!!:thumbup:

kronick,ya intro is a little played out"same level" good wordplay,both need better vocab
i wasnt feelin ya endin i thought it was a bit weak,but overall your punches n flow were betta/
The one,i felt ya fucked up ya flow at tha second line"ya me"i wasnt feelin ya hits or ya flow,it was good just not betta sorry dawg..

punches/k
flow/k
multis/both
creativity/both
vocab/none
overall/knonick
honest vote---vote/kronick

aight, cmon ppl we need feedbak an votez on thiz battle, so cmon!

c'mon lets get sum mo votes.....dayum.....how long is dis gonna be up here.

cmon peepz....letz get sum votez against or for me..don't matta

cmon ppl....vote!!an i'll hit up urz...just leave ur link

this whole battle was bullshit, Kronicks verse sounds either bitten or recycled, and Theones verse, I wish his shit wouldve been bitten so I wouldnt have to go thru this shit every time I vote on a battle.

Kronik, Ur entire first bar was garbage and did'nt match the style in the rest of Ur battle verse. it was stretched and U wrote shit that U knew aint ryme so U had to put shit in bold letters just so that niggaz heads would'nt combust from the stupidity. the next few bars were more on key in wat U should be doing. Ur personals were wak and Ur punchess were kinda played out. U shouldve encorporated more time into Ur verse, yeah it does show that U did'nt. 5 out of 10

Theone, everytime I see U, I feel like taking ur computer hostage at gunpoint while I pistlewhip out of the Ur writers Block. I tested my endurance today by seeing how much of Ur rymes I could read befor my IQ droped. U should work On everything Uv ever know about hiphop all over again, the forget it, and start again till U get it right.

Personals, K
Flow, none
structure, none
wordplay, K
Punches, LoL, I guess K
Overall, K

V/ Kronick
its a shame when my vote has better punchlines then both Ur verses put together, U should serioucly elivate any way possible.

sorry for free posting, but could U hit up one of my battles in my sig and drop an honest vote. thanx.

aright this overall was not that good a batt..i wasnt feelin either of yas maximally but if i had to pick i probably felt kronick more, both of your punches were ok, once again i see one mc that got too defensive rather than offensive and that was kronick, plus your shit was painfully streched out, but theone's shit was just weak and the flow was way too inaccurate, my vote goes to kronick...

vote on my shit High on Chronic vs. Golden shellz, its somewhere down there i just forgot to find the link

Aight here's how a break it down ....

Personals, Kronik
Flow, kronik
structure, both wack
wordplay, Kronik
Punches, wack but kronik
creativity - neida
v- kronik

What a one sided battle.Kronik won in all areas

Personals: k
Flow: k
Structure: k
Wordplay: K
Punches: k
Creativity: k
vote: kronik