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gavin vs. *The~Star*
10 Lines or 5 Bars
No Stretching No D/R Gavin spitting first |
Well your mamma got drunk and fell asleep in the zoo with a monkey and a zebra it cam out with you/
wot u gonna do wen my whole crew iz blazin at u u got nowere to run to watch me point this gun to your head leave you deceased A.K.A DEAD. Boi i jack u and u whole family up with a blunt knife ure that weak coz im a little older im at the peak off my ryming ure terrible a timing ure. verse boy its time u had a rehears beforesum little nigga boots you outta the game u will proberly hit me with the same verse u used in yo last battle dont make me rattle youre teeth off the ground shoot u with a silencer so theres not a sound. uppin votes |
I'm ma take it eazy......
Gavin don’t want ‘none’ that’s why he stays out the ‘sun’ I’m bout to have ‘fun’ torching him with this ‘gun’ Talking ‘stuff’ but he won’t be able to back it ‘up’ I’ll leave him ‘stuffed’ as he would be for putting his hand in a ‘cup’ Come at me ‘wrong’, I’m bout to make you feel small like the crack of a ‘thong’ Trying to act ‘strong’ but he can’t do nothing when he on the ground with his mama singing that ‘song’ You ain’t touching my ‘game’ so you getting treated like the ‘same’ And that is get beat, cuz I destoy ‘lames’ that think they got true ‘game’ Trying to test ‘Star’, he must didn’t know I better than he’ll ever be by ‘far’ Leave ya red like the our neighbor ‘Mars’, leave you flat like some ‘tar’ |
No No
Yo,I just realized that he used the word nigga and he white.U not to say that word man.
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well gavin just basic shit no punches.. star hands down, came harder \\// the star vote on my battle yall http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129694 |
gavins structure was fucked up but he had some metas
gotta give him some credit your flow ws off because of your fucked up structure and his first line about the zoo and shit was played no orginality there your wordplay.......dont know im not reading it again punches and personals.......... weak need to elevate the star *props* good verse man you had a ok structure you had some extended lines but nothin to mess you up your was flow wasnt bad punches and personals hit alot harder you had the better metas and wordplay so keep it up v/star |
^ill vote when i get enough posts so dont bitch about it
pm if i forget |
Neither one were great, both need work... Gavin structure and flow was all f*cked up, but he was a little more creative. The star came real weak and even though his flow and structure was there I jus wasn't feelin it. So I'mma have to give it the Gavin... oh yeah watch ya mouth.
winner..... gavin |
star getz my vote, both were basic but he came down harder, alrite peace. return the favor.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129719 PeacE. |
gotta go wit tha gurl star she came way harda than gavin,
gavin had weak structure, overall weak vote star |
Come on peeps,y'all sleeping.One more vote 2 get another KO
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both were kinda weak but start came out pretty decent so my vote goes to star~1~
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