WillNova vs. Etcetera
 

battle me you punk
10 lines min
20 lines max
you spit first
15 minutes to drop after check in.

aight, I'll go first but two verses... in plus I don't remember challengin u???
hahaha... u wild, let me just check in

this my neighbor from Waste Haven//
hide ya face prayin, ya bars have me horrified like Wes Craven//
lets face it, I battled u jus to test my endurance//
I'm in three battles already, I raped u for insurance//
u watered down like florist, wash up like chuck norris//
and u stay broke down like seats in the Forrest//(movie theatre in West Haven)
u repeat songs like chorus, I hit hard like hooks//
u ruin everything u touch like chefs who can cook//
people like u stay shook, it took balls too challenge me//
sacrafice to battle me, stay grounded like gravity//

aight.... u betta come wit sum fire

you speak about my town but your from nowhere//
even if i knew where you lived never would i go there//
obviously your town produces wack ass emcees//
will nova if i was you dick you still couldnt fuck with me//
ill murder you even before your flow starts//
youll break apart like a lexus up against a go kart//
if you so sick you shouldve stayed home//
i snatch hearts like quarters from broken payphones//
remember the name that put you to shame etcetera//
i ripped you up and im taking all competitors//
while you on this site trying to get your run hard//
me i be in the court pendin on a gun charge//
you got beef with me you gotta be insane//
remember im quick to cook like my name was dane//

flow etc

vocab both

structure etc

overall vote etctera she just came harder

return tha favor vote please


http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129270

my dawg will nove got this one etc i wasnt feelin ya very much i mean flow was good vocab was alright pretty basic though
v/willnova

both of yall ripped it I give props to both i would vote that if i could

aight, tahnx for the votes... still need more so I'm uppin for votes. lets get them votes in

Flow=E
Personals=None
Wordplay=None
Creative=E
Punches=E

Etcetrea had better punches and nice flow.Willnova didn't have no punches.He just came weak overall.I don't know what he was thinking.

Vote=Etcetrea

c'mon still need more votes, still uppin.... get them votes in

Etc: You got nice flow. Keep up the good work.

Will: You need to work on your structure. I wasn't really feeling your flow. I'm sorry

Vote: Etc.

Will had some good punches, and his back to back ryme style fixes his structure if U actually know how to read at a regular level Tweeza. but its kewl, E wateva did great, I was expecting U to mail me back and tell me who U picked to battle but ok. Etcetera had some great punches, the only problem I had was that they werent really aimed at her opponnent. The only thing that messed Will Up was his use of inside jokes, stop it stop it. but since he explained it, I understood him enough to get my vote. Etcetera, Im next, U got a double date wit me and destiny, and we do like to run trains, kid.

V/WillNova

tahnx for the votes, jsu keep them comin... uppin for them vidotes

c'mon people lets get them votes in, u notice I keep sayin this, cause nobody votin pleeeeze... I'm beggin

willNova
dont put the //s after ur lines...thats newbish...ur structure was pretty good...flow was good for the most part...u had some nice metas...wordplay was basic, not very good...some of ur punches connected...personals were ok...

etcetera
dont feed off of his verse...thats gay...structure was good...flow was on target...u had a few metas...wordplay was pretty good...some of ur punches connected...personals were aight...

Overall
this battle was close...ectetera had better wordplay...both had a good structure as well as a good flow...both had ok personals...willnova had better metas...and because ectetera fed, it took away from those punches, so willnova took that category as well...basing off of that...willnova gets my vote...

VOTE - WILLNOVA