deadly vision vs. enygma
 

deadlines:
battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 line min.
16 line max.

Wtf We Battlin For The Second Time!!!

Third actually. Well, if you would have showed in last weeks tournament battle it would have been three.......

Check

lol

Yea the 5 way match .....damn sou l told me about it after people voted. OOh well homey. Lets do this....10 lines blah!! aight.

Here's 12 for ya.....I hope you like it :)

You watch the tough get going....cause your going's getting tough
I should stretch before givin ass whoopins....
....But your lines are stretched enough
Where's the fucking bandwagon?....cause this dude just loves to board 'em
This faggot's begging to get recognized...
.....In his own fucking forum!
You shouldn't get your hopes up.....shit, I like your confidence
But I'm ripping this pussy....
....like a clumsy Gynocologist
You must be fucking crazy.....don't know who you're fucking wit
I can tell you're fucking nuts....
.....Your asshole's too wide for just the dick
This cat's gangsta? Are you kidding me?......shit, I'll admit it
This dude's busting caps....
....his head's too big for the fitted
Stop beating around the bush.....you'll never be in the coochie
so please, be frank....
.....cause we're sick of you being Suzie!

Owned!

=Opener=

23-9!! Witness me dig the 'Spade' in his 'Heart' this verse is Haneous from Start..
Enigmatic homo! u love My dick juss cuz I got mah Name on the Charts..

=Heat=

He knows i got harsh words that'll 'Split his Girdle' when I Spit this Verbal..
A so called Vet! Enygma the only play that u get is yo crew giving u honor or jerkin off to Info-Mercial..
Go ahead diss me while u Roam from Board 2 Board Suspiciously..
U aint cookin like i said! U beggin for a rematch might gain u some Publicity..
Vicious Felonies, while his weak open mic crew C.S spits 'Friendlier Melodies'..
Beat u b4 herb,but I Got a Question when attemptin 2 battle me again was it Envy or Jealousy..
=M-E-R-K-E-D=



^^U claim that u are 'fly', switch it around but deserve tittle herbness for Life'..
Nothin Personal, Just Business!!Ur rhymes are weak & ugly, Like his mugshot wit his transexual Wife..

Blah!!Hope u enjoy this...one.
:thumbup:

Votes.

WOW......we're fuckin dope! We are the only ones to drop on the first day.....

aight this is a mediocre battle if u ask me

dv ur structure was really better but quoting is gay since every1 is doin it ya know, enygma urz it quite garbo, i seen wordplay come from the both of you to

Vicious Felonies, while his weak open mic crew C.S spits 'Friendlier Melodies'..
Beat u b4 herb,but I Got a Question when attemptin 2 battle me again was it Envy or Jealousy..
^^that was the punch that just killed it, dv got some personals on enyg

You must be fucking crazy.....don't know who you're fucking wit
I can tell you're fucking nuts....
.....Your asshole's too wide for just the dick
^^this was ur best punch but i believe u didnt have that much to actually take him down

vote-dv he didnt just have punches he had stronger personals too

if neither of u two slutbags like this vote then you're both gay :)

ooaaaaaa
lol
well
let me break it down
E, came alright can tell he didnt really try, didnt have hardly any punches. personals where alright tho
DV just came harder in my mind in all aspects. he wanted it more. he got it..

flowz: dv
punches: bearly dv
personals: dv
multies: none
wordplay: dv

pretty much sums it up.

\\// DV

pffffffft
Engyma got this shit easily.
better punches
more wit.
DV, the links get played out after a while.
expecially when you dont use them creativly
v/Engyma
for coming stronger

breakdown for enygma:

flow:kinda off in some spots i thought wasn't workin as well as i've seen in past weeks 5.5/10

volcab: alright nothing really to say here 6/10

punches:a couple of alright lines not too bad on trying with the personals my fav line,"You shouldn't get your hopes up.....shit, I like your confidenceBut I'm ripping this pussy........like a clumsy Gynocologist" alright job 6.5/10

overall:18/30

breakdown for deadly vision:

flow:alot clearer then enygma i thought good job 7/10

volcab:nothing overly special here workin alright though 6/10

punches:some good lines my fav,"Nothin Personal, Just Business!!Ur rhymes are weak & ugly, Like his mugshot wit his transexual Wife.. " good close, both of you did well on the personals 6.5/10

overall:19.5/30

vote--close battle but i'm voting for deadly visions

LOL.......are you serious?

How can anyone say that he had a better flow? I threw a punch talking about how stretched his lines would be and he still came with them. I can't believe you fucking idiots don't know what a good verse consists of....

Nice spit DV.......I just thought mine was better......

^^thanks u had nice verse to dawg.

score:

3-1

up please.

enygma's verse had some nice creativiiity,punches.structure and flow was good...i like the punch about the stretched out lines...but yes you had some nice word play in this verse

DV ur structure was a little ugly from my point of view...punches were decenent...but the gay jokes are mad played...,okey shit man you flowed okay in this,.....but ur puntches didnt hit as hard as enygma's did

v/ enygma-- for harder hittin punches,and a nice structure