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The Mexican 06-14-04 02:09 AM

Drama n Stress
 
Drama n Stress
seems like that is all that is left
in this relationship wit us
I made a mistake in the past
but this is the present
I pray everyday but I just can’t seem 2 fa get it
you took a risk on me n I appreciate it
you helped me straitin up my life
an now I have everything orchestrated
girl you’re the one I want n now I got you
never eva wanna lose you
you keep me 2getha n wit out you I’d fall apart
I hope that I always stay in your heart
I hope we last and that we never fail
I’ll support you no matta what you do
baby this i promise you

The Mexican 06-14-04 02:11 AM

feed back plz

verbal violence 06-14-04 02:29 AM

yo im feelin it that was pretty tight playa keep it up ight ~1~

The Mexican 06-14-04 02:40 AM

thanx man...uppin

Ravage 06-14-04 03:22 AM

......
 
hope she forgave you after that shit...

The Mexican 06-14-04 03:23 AM

feed back plz

The Mexican 06-14-04 03:31 AM

ya she did but we broke up bout a month or so afta

The Mexican 06-14-04 06:02 PM

feed back plz

The Mexican 06-14-04 11:55 PM

damn...don't jus read it...hit me up n tell me what da hell u think bout it...feed back plz...

The Mexican 06-18-04 02:15 AM

DAMN...Quit sleepin on dis...hit me up wit some feedback...

fluidmoon 06-30-04 08:21 PM

yo, this was noble of u man, you showed your emotions and feelings, and that your not afraid to display them for public viewing, thats a good quality, anyways, i liked it,
some raw shit

God 06-30-04 08:28 PM

that was pretty dope had lots of emotion's and alot of feeling going toward the piece ..and i really found it good.. really impressed me...

The Mexican 06-30-04 10:23 PM

Damn...thanx fa da feedback...uppin dis still...feed back plz

The Mexican 07-09-04 02:48 AM

still uppin...hit me up wit feedback and i'll get back at some of ya stuff....

XêN†R!K 07-09-04 06:11 AM

im feelin that homie nice drop.. reminds me of a past relationship.. she took a risk on you? was she over 18 and your under 18? just a guess.. haha aite 1


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