tell me what yall think of dis...
 

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ayo im new wit dis shit but my flow is decent...but anyways i want to know what yall think of dis...

ayo lyrically im a vandle bringin them ill skills that u bitches cant handle//
causin drama like tha bill and monica scandle//
talkin down on me and you'll get your whole crew dismantled//
im tellin you dawg we aint playin wit ya//
never slackin, for real we commin to get ya//
lil bitch be dead once my fist hit ya//
have your mom leanin over your casket to kiss ya//
look all you bitches is frontin//
stickin yall cheast out wit yo mouth runnnin like you want somethin//
but nope he aint doing nuthin, in his own mind he knows hes bluffin//
lil bitch get smoked like tha shit that im puffin//
your fuckin wit da grave diggaz BITCH your fuckin wit death//
straight up ill rip the fuckin lungs out of yo cheast//
place them in you hands and show u meanin of holdin your breath//
im ready for any muthafuka whos ready to test//
shut up bitch i aint tryin to hear yo nonsence//
my shit is labeled wit explicit content//
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and thats it yall im out for now its gettin late ight ~1~

that was hot i like that shit you spit for a newb

nobody else postin what they think about this???

it was cool tha structure was off though but good drop keep elevaten

not liking the structure or flow but it was aight...

Yeah man your flow was hot for a newb

i liked it. good lyrics, good vocab. just the structure wus just a tad off, but other than that it was good, peace/

8/10 nice job

werd homie, that wuz pretty dope, werd