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verbal violence 06-14-04 08:23 PM

Verbal violence vs.. The~Star
 
yo 5-10 lines max
no voter shit
first to 5 wins
u spit first aight~1~

verbal violence 06-14-04 08:43 PM

ok star now aint the time to get sentamental//
im bout to drop my verse real illmental//
i heard u was a geek so i will go real gental//
i come harder than a sentinel(type of machine)//
cuz im higly lyrical on another level//
crome imbezzeld//
u the star for gay porn//
leave this kid mest up thinkin hes reborn//
his heart get throwin toss him in the air he be sorin he think hes gonna stomp on me but im sharper than a thorn//
verbal violence come as hard as it gets bitches like u get torn//

*The~Star* 06-14-04 08:58 PM

Iz Murder
 
-I’m bout to rip this dude,just like, easily as ripping paper
-Taking advantage of him,I’m ma be known as the first female rape-err
-Look at ya record,its obvious-that you no competition
-So when you get this loss,please don’t start the bitching
-I just don’t understand,how can you not see that you equivalent to trash
-Guess it’ll always be mystery,while you try to throw this dissin’ at me
-This dude a bitch, that’s known to switch, put a lil more in it than the ordinary trick
-Stay erected for men, his shit be harder than a brick
-I’m the one to put a gun to ya head, and let it be said, I left you dead
-But it ain’t my fault you on ya death-bed, murder she wrote was said

verbal violence 06-14-04 09:01 PM

ight now thas done lol.... uppin for them votes peeps ight~one~

Prolicx 06-14-04 11:53 PM

omg she ripped you. tha female raper was nice, good punches.
verb you didn come as hard this time, an ya punchs was kinda wack
yall both was nice, star jus took it.
vote star

WillNova 06-15-04 01:27 AM

wat happened verbal... came a little weak this time. But the fight was still good. Star came in and went at it.

winner.... *The~Star*

verbal violence 06-15-04 01:35 PM

yo uppin them votes peoples up on dis right here ight~1~

mC RIOT 06-15-04 03:44 PM

the star ripped u apart nigga. your rhymes were like 5 words per sentence man haha work on your flow. she was dope, u werent, period.

-$treetZ- 06-15-04 04:40 PM

dayum the star took this easily lol

the star you had sick flow and structure.....and the personals were hittin him hard...i was feelin ur lines they all hit hard..you straight up merked him..LOL...keep doin you...you had good wordplay and your creativitie was ill fo real.....lol you merked him easily

vV
bad structure ok personals..wasnt feelin anythin u wrorte...u had no punches..u got merked mayn

vote The Star

can u vote on this battle
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129341

*The~Star* 06-16-04 01:09 AM

Come on people.Just one more til another KO :shoot:

Prodigy 06-16-04 02:03 AM

Shit some one got merked... my vote gose to Star...

Best punch
I’m the one to put a gun to ya head, and let it be said, I left you dead
-But it ain’t my fault you on ya death-bed, murder she wrote was said

V~
ok star now aint the time to get sentamental//
im bout to drop my verse real illmental//
i heard u was a geek so i will go real gental//

Lost it after that...V

Vote~Star


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