natural thug
 

everybody thinks they a thug from da colors they wear//
everyone thinks they a thug from tha way that theey stare//
the way the walk around talkin bad, actin like they dont care//
but thats where i come in and go upside they head wit a steel chair//
when i see a fake ass thug my temper just flares//
you can tell im heated just by my evil glares//
you see these nikkaz have done wrong to tha game//
callin themselves thug cuz they think they insaine//
they dont understand its gotta run through they veins//
think they thugs but when it comes to me these bitches get tamed//
red and blue rags//
rocawear pants sagged//
new era caps, but its not a cap its a flag//
but when i look in dey eyes i can see that they fags//
cause a true thug is ruthless//
a true thug like me will come along hit u in yo face and leave yo ass TOOTHLESS......

ayo i need some feed back on that i just did it off tha dome tell me whatchu think..ight ~1~

dayum no feed back?? thats some shit

haha feelin it good poem
rocawear pants sagged//
new era caps, but its not a cap its a flag//
but when i look in dey eyes i can see that they fags//
cause a true thug is ruthless that line was phat 9/10

keep cummin wit it j

that wuz dope homie. i liked tha part with tha steel chair. im in R.O.D. 2, werd

ayo dat was hott
when i see a fake ass thug my temper just flares//
you can tell im heated just by my evil glares//
you see these nikkaz have done wrong to tha game//
callin themselves thug cuz they think they insaine// <--- dats ill
<<RoD>>

That shit was hot as hell. Time to get these fake ass niggas back down to they roots.

any more feed back??????????????....................