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Caliber 06-14-04 10:52 PM

Tell me what u think
 
Hip-Hops my hustle i think u should know/
This shits to me like coke is to Al Po/
Im versitile with a quick or slow flow/
A nigga dont like me,do i care,no/
I think my shit is nice/
Keep it in niggas heads like lice/
Jackin niggas up like im livin in the city of vice/
Just tryin to keep my shit right/
right/
Im seein the light/
Like Crackheads clothes im tight/
And yall niggas shit is stupid/
like sunglasses at night/
ok,I can do this shit all day/
Im just soittin for fun,kinda pavin my way/
Shit im out tell me what u think o.k.//
post what u think

Country 06-14-04 11:10 PM

umm...nah kid. it was iight, but i wasn't really comprehending it. flow was ok, multies sucked, and ur words were elementry. but keep activite. holla


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