da magician 7 vs. OverDone
 

iight look son U spit first iight 10-20 lines


no hate votes
no crew votes
no d/r votes
explain all votes
no feedin or bitin iight lets get at it u go ahead n spit ma nigga ~!1!~

yo lets get it poppin spit ya verse dud cuz I wanna drop...n i dont kno if yo ass gon drop...so u dropin first iiight ~!1!~ hurry up drop yo shit by tanight

yo overdone bitch dont be challengin people if u aint goin threw with damn foo

hello
 

ok look am late but atleast im here....
That more than i can say for your rimes and thats sincere~
Im sorry was that rude....
If you leave now you will only walk away beaten and bruised~
gee man 2 strikes your almost out.....
here comes your 3rd now i know what your all about~
what is this dude fucken kidding.....
when I knock this shit on his ass I would hope he would stay sitten~
how far do you want me to go.....
havent you realized you rap like a fucken hoe~
ok look im done with you......
I think this battles over i won its true~

hey dude it was fun sorry i was late im new to this site :banghead:

Stay quiet cause I dont like how you actin kid....
U couldnt drop hot shit if u ate a burnt laxative....
I tell u dat u suck I said ur like a snail but i kno ur slower dun.....
Ma flow is 2 hot..i cooked him, but i think i left him 'OverDone'......
I got dat sick kinda spit i drop hot shit I flow 'Sars'....*sick*
Like a water fall of frozn messed up bikes,u got a flow but no hot bars...
You kno da magician spits sick shit cuz i spit da flu.....
look dog its 'cancer' even ya rapper is sick of you.....
u do time in fall, i hit u wit punches dat hurt dispise da fall....
when u said dat u live in a house dawg u suprised us all.......*
let me blaze dis bitch, a rookie watch him get 2 da 2nd stage n quit....
yo U spit a wack ass verse and i gave u 3 days ta spit....


~~!~FiiNiiSHA~!~~

but ova all u kno u soft like da stuff made by bakers....(dough)
n ya rhymes wudnt be 'worthy' if u played for da 'lakers'....**


*(above his rapper it says 'From: in a house')
**(James 'Worthy' played for the lakers...)

iight lets get sum votes iight na mean honest votes ma peoplez~!1!~

UPPPIN DIS SHIT DAWG i wanna close dis...personaly I think i ripped him fa rizzle iight dawgs UPPPPPPPIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hey nice man it was alot of fun thanks for battlen

break down...
 

ok look am late but atleast im here....
That more than i can say for your rimes and thats sincere~
7/10 good openin and punch
Im sorry was that rude....
If you leave now you will only walk away beaten and bruised~
3/10 weak punch
gee man 2 strikes your almost out.....
here comes your 3rd now i know what your all about~
2/10 weaker punch ya losin me
what is this dude fucken kidding.....
when I knock this shit on his ass I would hope he would stay sitten~
3/10 alright i guess
how far do you want me to go.....
havent you realized you rap like a fucken hoe~
5/10 gettin better
ok look im done with you......
I think this battles over i won its true~
4/10 weak endin, dont know if thats tru tho lets c...


Stay quiet cause I dont like how you actin kid....
U couldnt drop hot shit if u ate a burnt laxative....
8/10 funny and good openin
I tell u dat u suck I said ur like a snail but i kno ur slower dun.....
Ma flow is 2 hot..i cooked him, but i think i left him 'OverDone'......
6/10 good punch
I got dat sick kinda spit i drop hot shit I flow 'Sars'....*sick*
Like a water fall of frozn messed up bikes,u got a flow but no hot bars...
6/10 speed ya shit up like that
You kno da magician spits sick shit cuz i spit da flu.....
look dog its 'cancer' even ya rapper is sick of you.....
5/10 lol dissin his rapper but kinda weak tho
u do time in fall, i hit u wit punches dat hurt dispise da fall....
when u said dat u live in a house dawg u suprised us all.......*
7/10 makin fun of his avator
let me blaze dis bitch, a rookie watch him get 2 da 2nd stage n quit....
yo U spit a wack ass verse and i gave u 3 days ta spit....
not votin since already did 10 lines....but good shit

~~!~FiiNiiSHA~!~~

but ova all u kno u soft like da stuff made by bakers....(dough)
n ya rhymes wudnt be 'worthy' if u played for da 'lakers'....**
good ending, still no vote tho

Over-24/50
magic-27/50

close battle, hit my shit up and do it honestly since i hit yours up honestly... dont vote for me cause i vote for you, and dont vote agaisnt me cause i voted agaisnt you not tryin to hate on anyones shit, just tryin to make each other better at this...

yo good vote but look. i said 10-20 lines as in =10 lines min, 20 lines max, nice honest f=vote dog, UPPPPIN DIS SHIT FO SOME MO VOTES SON! ~!i1i!~
ME 1-0

OverDone
structure was ok...some of ur lines were simple, but some were good...flow fell off a lil...no metas...wordplay was ok...a few of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Da MaGiCiAn 7
structure was ok...some of ur lines were stretched...flow fell off a lil due the stretchness...a few metas...wordplay was pretty good...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
both had an ok structure...neither had a stable flow...neither had good personals...magician had more metas...better wordplay...and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...magician gets my vote...

VOTE - DA MAGICIAN 7

Magician rippid U like a lunchable nigga. Dont thank him for battling, thank him for whooping Ur ass. U had no punchlines, No metaphore, a flow that needs to be under construction for a while, but other than that, U was ok. Magician came up wit some nice punches, he also came up wit some stupid shit at the same time battle but the good outwaighted the bad. He hit precise and knew wat he wanted out this battle. He Tormented his opponent with rib battering rymes that gave him a deffinet victory.
Im exageration like a mu fucka but hay, he got the win so fuck it.

V/ da magician 7

nice verse magician

Pnuches~M
FLow~M
Structure~M
Closer/Opener~M
Worplay~M

M nice verse specially the closer. couldnt be worthy if you played fo the lakers

one sided battle magician u took this.not bad they were prewrite but not bad it was ok cause anything coulda taken his verse.good flow.overdone u need longer lines and more complexity aight work on better punches especially openers and closers and personals and work on flow.magician gets my vote for punches and flow

v/magician
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