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whitey313 vs re$tricted voted plz!!!!
ight rules
no crew no hating no biting u kno blind spit |
.::Ch-Check::.
~R~ |
I'm known for rattlin'~herbs while ya battlin' I'll dismantle~ya~verse an' leave ya babblin'~words/
I'll teach you a lesson~in~rhymes, you couldn't "handle~my~verse" if you "BMXed~wit~my~lines"/ Smith an' Wesson's~are~fine, but I suggest it'd be best if you digested~this~nine/ faggot ya cowardly, you can't overpower~me, I'll get violent an' "spit shells" like I'm eatin "sunflower~seeds"/ apparently ya scared~o'~me cuz you seemed to approach me carefully/ were you afraid to throw a punch? Do yo need some assistance?/ bitch, your fame is "short lived" like a "midget's existence"/ |
Nice Rhyme...But You Only Had One Punch LOL... Whitey313?? Kid Please..Another Fake Ass Eminem Wannabe.. I Could Take You To 8-Mile..You'd Get Laughed At Hystericaly.. Trying Out For BluePrint..Haha I've Dissed Threw Whole Crew.. Got No Response..They're All Bitches..So I Guess It Suits You.. I'll Burn My Logic Into Your Brain Only To Seize Your Heart.. Too Much Intellect Your Incompitent Mind Wouldn't Know Where To Start.. Your Ego Too Big To Test The Best..Dog Your Just A Verbal Whore.. You Can't Handle Vets and Beef...This Bitch Is A Herb-A-Vore.. I Snap Weak Necks..And Chin Check This Faggot To Get Him Straight.. By The Time He Realized He Conflicted With Death..It Was Too Late.. ~R~ |
^^^fuck lol ok uppin
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okay break down
punches:R flow:R wordplay:none structure:R personals:both overall:restricted can you guys drop a vote on this plz..... return tha fava the link is at the bottom of my sig |
.::Uppin#1::. ~R~ |
aight this shit was one sided
white- you had a nice flow but i only saw like one punch...you were just freestylin i think..like whats this line about Smith an' Wesson's~are~fine, but I suggest it'd be best if you digested~this~nine/ not feelin it R- nice verse you actually had some punches and that personal about blueprint was all you needed...and that herb-a-vore...nice drop but not your best vote-Restricted drop an honest one on this http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129267 |
Nice battle,one of the best I have yet to see.Let me break it down.
Flow=Both Wordplay=Restricted Structure=Both Punches=Restricted by a hair So my vote=Restricted Both came with nice verses.But in the end,its about who had harder punches & wordplay.Holla at my battles \/ |
Restricted won as u can see eaasly
bestline-Whitey313?? Kid Please..Another Fake Ass Eminem Wannabe.. I Could Take You To 8-Mile..You'd Get Laughed At Hystericaly.. u beta him wit dat line ahahhahahah worsteline-none whitey u had 1 punch ahahahahahahah bestline-I'm known for rattlin'~herbs while ya battlin' I'll dismantle~ya~verse an' leave ya babblin'~words/ descnet worsteline-alot winner-R |
.::Uppin #2::. ~R~ |
::.Uppin#3.:: ~R~ |
.:::.Uppin#4.:::. ~R~ |
One sided battle.....Whitey your verse was decent...and your punches were okay...but they didnt seem to hit hard ya know....But your structure was messed up manye...Restricted your verse was better i thought and your punches were better too they hit hard also...So overall R got this for better verse and punches....
v/ ~R~ Hit My Battle up against $treetZ in my sig (Honest Vote)......Please |
:::...Upping#5...::: ~R~ |
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