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Round 2: Poison v. Verbal Violence
min.10 lines, 15 lines max
no crew or hate votes no d/r votes please all fully explained votes verse do in an hour lets do it Its gettin serious yall! |
ok heer we go again tramp//
im commin again bout to push on u like the stamp act// cuz im flippin pages im bout to get Ridiculously outrageous// he about to get served thats his wadges// im the lyrical terror bynladen i have him going through phases// so step back as my verbal attacks come out from u and retract// its my killer instinct tellin me to attack// kids dumb though he moved into my flow and didnt know how to react// i marked this kid as my test that went bad// now all he hyped up under a trance// he called a round 2 knowin he aint got a chance// im bout to inject my venom a.k.a anthrax// im done witht his clown now im strapped// this kid lost and i won like the lakers back to back// ~1~!!!!! holla bak |
lets go
mah rhymes is noble an worldwide, you can call me tha duke
see tha first time we battled you can call it a fluke// when it comes to ya rhymes, "you got it bad" like usher you a tru busta, an im tha superior rhyme crusher// ya right you are bin laden ima send you into hidin you aint no lyrical terror man quit lyin// ya cant kill this, ima "die hard" killa like bruce willis nobody reads ya shit like nobody wants syphilis// tha basis of my flow been dated back to a million yrs. ago found written on tha walls of a temple in tha middle of congo// my rhymes ancient, an you battlein a legend labled as a emcee killa wit lines emphasized as weapons// im like tha clouds dawg im ova ya head you should be banned for waistin space in a thread// done. |
uppin for votes^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
he shouldn get one vote look^ stapped an anthrax dont rhyme at all |
Vote=Poison
Once again to me it was murder.Poison came hard on the punches for every bar.Verbal had some nice punches 4 sho,just not harder than Poison.Poison also had nice structure & flow.To me,Poison just ripped you up.Holla back. |
yo could yall vote on this right here!!!!!!!!!!~1~
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Poison ya fuccen ripped his neck off. ya flow xcellent. way much better than opponent. and plus ya lines wasn't basic, disses and similes were 'sistent. but both nedd 'vatin on mult's. Verbal you were rhymin, but try varyin ya rhyme scheme a little-- i aint the best at it-- thats why u keep practicin homie
my v/ Poison |
i dont have 20 yet but u got my pinion. i poll when i get 20
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im sry verbal, gotz to give this battle poison, his rap was better overall, your pretty good verbal, i think u just wernt concentrated enough, keep it come'n peace.
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yoyoyoy, round two was hotttt, verbal v came out hittin hard but not as hard as he could, might of been sleepin. Cause Poison struck him wit a hard combo of punches and his bars were tight. Do I hear a round three??? tiebreaker???
winner.... Poison Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
ayo das a good idea nova.
still uppin fa votes |
flow=both
punches=verbal vocab=verbal humor=poison overall= verbal Verbal smoked u by........ now all he hyped up under a trance// he called a round 2 knowin he aint got a chance// im bout to inject my venom a.k.a anthrax// im done witht his clown now im strapped// this kid lost and i won like the lakers back to back// and poison this is what made u lose.......tha basis of my flow been dated back to a million yrs. ago found written on tha walls of a temple in tha middle of congo// |
that was tight
flow-both voc.-poison ryhme-poison punches-both i think overall - poison got ya but still tight flow verb Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
ok my vote was dq'd hey verse shit u lost and now u tryin to dq everyone. here is this explained enough for ya
verb ur punches didnt hit as hard as poisons.. poison had better wordplay and used good vocabulary.urs was good but posion had a better flow .. your flow wasnt as good .. plus i liked reading poisons more cause it was entertaining |
why the hell isnt the votes like they were it was like 4 to nothin now its like 2 nothin and the battle we had before is like 2-nothin whats up wit dat?
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