Gangsta
 

Somebody being me thats hard to see
Ah nigga killing people for fun thats unlikely!!
I sell hoes and I sell a packagez of mikies
Cus I hate fonies and especially gruopies!!
Thats why I can't picture me next to ah nigga
He better hope I aint got a gun cus I'll surely pull da trigga!!
Leave um on da ground fucked up and wastit
If he's still alive then he better just face it!!
Cus u know me man I explode and pop
So if ah bitch says "No" I aint gonna stop!!
Cus I flow sick with this Hip Hop
Leave ah nigga at da drug deal still waitin for da drop!!

it was ok but ur structure needs a lil mo touching up u'll get betta ova time

mmr was u talkin bout me in that kill for fun verse????

it'z was kid play but needs 2 b touched up a lil bit ight

killed the verse.......not too bad

same as everybody else it jus needs some work here and there but not so bad at all......

needs work & work on ur style & structure so u can improve on ur technique