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L.E 06-16-04 03:46 PM

.:Limited Edition Vs. DatBoyJay:. (The Real One)
 
A'ight...rules was in bitchslapped thread:

10 Lines Max
No Hate, Crew, D/R Votes
200+ Posts to Vote.
Check in.
No Biting
No Feeding
Blind Spit
Verses due by Midnight tonight.

I think that was it...a'ight, lets do this...

DatBoyJay 06-16-04 04:06 PM

Often when i battle niggas, i often abuse them/
But you lucky i like blonde bitches i find them amusing/
You think you Eminem,you not even a Stan/
38 in a karate class cuz you tired of getting harrassed/
how you got ill intentionz,you a white rapper from Canada/
sorry so short im at work i write later............................................. ...........

L.E 06-16-04 04:10 PM

A'yo...check it...

Check this kid...2-0 record...this herb is scarless
Surprised by it...'cause he doesn' know what a bar is
Thinkin' you hot...and you think that you are respected
Merk you so bad...your skill is as tragic as Nine-Eleven
The only way you bringin' heat is if you put a stick in my fire
Droppin' cute five line verses...that I can hear at a Christmas Choir
Bitch...this was a waste of time...you did you accept?
You born loser...no, more like Limp Bizket...born reject
Haha...did not even have to try...what a pointless battle
Come back and see me...


...When one punch is more than you can handle...

-$treetZ- 06-16-04 04:16 PM

lol this is an easy win for Limted...good battle thoughl..

limited addition..ok rhymes
you had good personals
didnt see too many punches
you merked him in the first 4 bars
good structure and flow...i was feelin it...nice battle

datboy:
too basic...u culd of stepped up
the shit was aiight...but i wasnt feelin any of ur lines
some shit i see u tried to come hard but u didnt
bad personals and structure and flow
but good try

vote LIMITED

can u return the favour and drop a vote on this battle
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129924

C.March 06-16-04 08:33 PM

LIMITED = RIPPED THIS KID.. cant vote cause Limited is in mah crew...

L.E 06-17-04 10:31 AM

A'ight uppin'' this shit for votes....leave a link and I'll hit it up.

DeLeon 06-17-04 11:01 AM

Check this kid...2-0 record...this herb is scarless
Surprised by it...'cause he doesn' know what a bar is
ha ha nice personal
Thinkin' you hot...and you think that you are respected
Merk you so bad...your skill is as tragic as Nine-Eleven
nice punch
The only way you bringin' heat is if you put a stick in my fire
Droppin' cute five line verses...that I can hear at a Christmas Choir
ha ha funny shit
Bitch...this was a waste of time...you did you accept?
You born loser...no, more like Limp Bizket...born reject
ha damn
Haha...did not even have to try...what a pointless battle
Come back and see me...when one punch is more than you can handle

ripped him....im not even gonna break down the other kids verse
cuz it was totally wack limited took this hands down.....

overall:7.5/10
Jay:4.0/10

vote: limited edition...... why? look at the verses

hit up my battle with DON

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...234#post1350234

L.E 06-17-04 03:06 PM

A'ight thx...this is bein slept on too...fuckin' people vote on this shit, and leave a link...

L.E 06-18-04 12:06 PM

Holy fuck bein slept on...Upp this shit...vote for fuck sakes...

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 06-18-04 05:09 PM

DatBoiJays Verse:
Often when i battle niggas, i often abuse them/
But you lucky i like blonde bitches i find them amusing/
^Weak Opener!!! -/10


You think you Eminem,you not even a Stan/
38 in a karate class cuz you tired of getting harrassed/
how you got ill intentionz,you a white rapper from Canada/
^Okkkk...... -/10 ... Weak Once Yet Again.. lol!!

Limited Edition:
Check this kid...2-0 record...this herb is scarless
Surprised by it...'cause he doesn' know what a bar is
^Nice Opener.. But Cutt The Kidd Some Slack.. lol..!!! Done And Over With... With One Bar From L.E.!!! 9/10

Vote: Limited Edition!!!!

$MOKESKREEN 06-19-04 03:27 AM

Limited Edition had the best verse simply put. Nice personals and punches. Jay you came real weak with only a few lines and you need to just elevate. Up ya vocab. That was pretty much over after Limited's first bar.

Vote Limited

L.E 06-21-04 02:07 PM

Shit this is bein slept on...maybe I shouldn't have put a 200 post limit haha......

L.E 06-23-04 08:17 PM

Fuck fuck fuck FUCK FUCK fuck all you mo fuckin sleepers...drop a fucking link and I will hit it tha fuck up........uppin'.

Archeologist 06-23-04 08:20 PM

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131161
Vote and i will poll my vote..

Limited Walked this battle in style he ctrushed that fag easily.. trampeld all over him.. decent punches and flow was rolling along.. structure was steady.. Datboy jay not a bad verse but he ripped you a new ass hole..
pz.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131161
Vote and i will poll my vote..

Archeologist 06-23-04 08:27 PM

Just come to poll my vote since you voted.. thanx and..
pz.


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