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HoPPa 06-16-04 03:52 PM

HoPPa vs. D.O.C.
 
10-15 lines each.
NO Crew, no hate votes.
Due 15. minutes after check in.
Alrite gl peace. BitCH

HoPPa 06-16-04 04:05 PM

where u at D.O.C.??? im tha bitch? atleast i show up for battles after talkn shit.

HoPPa 06-16-04 04:31 PM

D.O.C., his rhymes are ass, and I know Ima beat em,
U shocked like a white person, about O.j. when they free’d em/
You don't make your own ryhmes, not even buy them, ur spent,
Your like a fucken 'Blockbuster' video store, u can't afford them, u rent/
This just aint your thing bitch, get out tha forums your rhymes gay,
Just go back to work at 'Burger King' where u can actually Have it your way/
You like a bee, when you sting once you are dead,
I’m a wasp, ill sting you again and again, I got plenty of lead/
just like mobb deep, i'll leave your gay ass shook,
faster than twista rapped in the damn guinness book/
My words, they stuck in your mind and got u feeln pressure,
The whole reason for this battle is to add to your losing record??
I hope you learned from this battle, not to mess wit tha best,
Cause ina freestyle battle, ya gonna die like the rest/

TheOne 06-16-04 04:44 PM

aight, i'm votin hoppa seein that DOC ain't gonna show any time soon

D.O.C. 06-16-04 04:44 PM

aight cool man

i dont know if i have any time cause i am at school now and my class is about to change

D.O.C. 06-16-04 05:39 PM

Back it up, a girl like you, a nigga like me can't pass it up/
Rollin by, lookin good, put it in reverse then back it up/

I'll have you taken back to Christ when you sacrifice/
The way you acting slice when I tear your back with knifes/

i stomped your man so unless you want what he got/
You better set the mic down, I'm steaming like a teapot/

Shiver and shake, quiver and quake/
Bite a rhyme and rip it off then stiffer and ache, whither and break/

You slithering snake, gibbering fake, fibbering flake/
I'll twist you into a different shape/

theres my shit ya bitches

vote on up

(arrow shooter) 06-16-04 06:12 PM

doc had better flow
use of words
and was overall better

PhAnToM01 06-17-04 12:30 AM

vote goes 2 hoppa....D.O.C. acted more like it was a freestyle na mean....

Flow:hoppa
Punches:hoppa
Wordplay:DoC

yo doc u need 2 work on ur punches u acted as if it was a freestyle...good shit 2 hoppa doe u bof need 2 elevate doe..

D.O.C. 06-17-04 01:12 PM

aight 1-1

ones vot doesnt count cause i didnt even spit and he vote for you

D.O.C. 06-22-04 02:12 PM

hey man why did the votes stop uppin for some more votes


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