Jesus's Father vs.. Verbal Violence
 

yo 10 - 20 lines max
first to 5 votes wins
no d/r votes
hater votes non of dat shit
u spit first aight~1~holla bak

lol

check in .............
dont no show newb.....

checkin in............

holla bak

ok look...............

wow this bitch is gonna come weak and childish,
fuck you bitch....
...call me martin luther, preachin nonviolence,
/\ play off your name you wack bitch,
verbal noting....
... the herpies you got surrounding your lips,
as you spit, i step back and puke,
i got the agialty...
...to give you stupid punches the juke,
nuke you, call you my fallen angel,
you look wack period....
....no matter the viewing angle,
this it down tothe last strech number nine,
your not violent....
...just verbal in you bitch ass whine.

lol/\ :thefinger

ok wut a verse lol

yo im bout to drop lyrical bombs//
over heaven jesus's father about to fall//
dont ever let this kid touch u he will deep throat your balls//
if he had any ayo cough**cough//
kick this kid to the pavement with out a yield sign his mom tellin me to stop//
he say he got agaility i hit him one time and he dropped//
sorry to burst ya bubble but dawg u aint hott//
so bow down, i aint gonna no show a new b clown//
he tried to walk on water but he drowned//
so make ya choice, i would lyriclly beat u if i had no voice//
so ima make him starve and thrive//
he be tellin u he will suck your dick for 2 dolla just to stay alive//

ok need yasll vote on dis emcee battle takes over rb lmao just post ya vote~1~

both were wack as fuck and neither deserve a vote.. but ima give it to VV so it aint a free post.. best structure Jesus but it dont go on that it goes on punches and VV had a lil bit harder punches..
pz.

aight jesus's father this isnt a hate vote im jus tryin to give u some tips my vote is gona be for verbal violence even though it was a close battle im votin for him cause he had a better structure that was easy to read and even though in real life if u used the same lines jesus woulda won, on rb its all about how it looks and flowsa cause ppl arent hearin it theyre readin it. i jus gota say u need to work on personals metaphors u got and work on ur structure try jus makin a line put 3 dots then do another line and itll read better aight keep elevatin good luck and good luck on our battle too

v/verbal

*cough* bullshit*cough* ]

lol lets get some real votes cuz um i am gonna flip in a min if we dont

u sayin thats bullshit damn little boy i was tryn to help u out cause lookin from our battle it looks like u need it cause u far from a god damn boy

Verbal had stronger punches for one, but he could work on complexity. Jesus, wtf was that? there was like no structure, n I could barely even see rhymes in there. no hate, Verbal gets this though, no doubt.

Peace

Violence had Better rhymes, hit harder, flowed easier.

The Father was good but lacked something....like a victory.

Violence takes this one.

lol what dr should have expected it from relunched lol stupid fucks lol

haha i cant belive this you got your own lil voting ring and rascal has to know who i am i am god from origanal anf this is some shit i am reportin all of you

go ahead i explained my vote really good no d/r there cause didnt vote on mine and if u so good how come i tore u up in our battle

Weak.
 

Jesus' Father....you're a sore loser, man. You got smoked. Stop crying'!

I'm also waitin for you to drop in OUT battle. Let's fucking go.