exogenious VS xXvEnOmXx
 

ight heres tha rules...

20 lines
no dr votes
no hating votes
no returned favor votes
dont take a dayum hour for your verse ight
u spit first

ayo hurry tha fuck up i aint got all night to play withchu seriously hurry

ok here i go

let me spit first cuz you cant drop a clean verse on the bod
and like he says he reps colorodo and he loves the ROD
He's fourth from the crown so his up-bringing is reproduced and done
I’m about to put cat in the E.R. Like they were showin’ Re-Runs
ill knock u out the park farther than Bonds hittin "72"
strange how i could turn a vagina side ways, add eyes and mistake it for u
I’m not playin games can't he get more Original with a Lamen Name
I actually think I’m your DNA the way you Say My Name In Vein
He’ll have a Loss of Memory so his Brain Waves will be Idle Lines
I’ll have you in an Ambulance Reppin’ ya Hood then you’ll really Show Vital-Signs

oh and check

you finally got your verse done hooraayy//
if u asked me id say it took all day//
leave this bitch in silence wit nuttin to say//
talkin bout hes my DNA but if he was then i'd be forced to be GAY//
dayum right im reppin in colorado, watch me let this go full throttle//
step to me again and you'll get yo head cracked wit a bottle//
talkin bad about me dawg thats bad for your health//
im cuttin off your legs so ill have u lookin like an elf//
leave this rap shit alone put your mic on the shelf//
ill leave you insane like, have u in tha frontlines tryin to battle yourself....

lets get the votes in now....

now we uppin for votes people....who u think won????

need some votes

vote bitches

im cuttin off your legs so ill have u lookin like an elf//
leave this rap shit alone put your mic on the shelf//
ill leave you insane like, have u in tha frontlines tryin to battle yourself.

nice line ven..
punches-7/10
structure-7/10
flow-8/10

I actually think I’m your DNA the way you Say My Name In Vein
He’ll have a Loss of Memory so his Brain Waves will be Idle Lines

thas the only punch i saw
punches-1/10
structure-6/10
flow-5/10

my vote goes to venom he came out strong with his punches and just dominated his opponent
v/venom

we need some votes up in this muthafuka wheres everyone at??????

exogenious drop:

let me spit first cuz you cant drop a clean verse on the bod
and like he says he reps colorodo and he loves the ROD
OK DECENT OPENER NOT THAT GOOD THO 6/10
He's fourth from the crown so his up-bringing is reproduced and done
I’m about to put cat in the E.R. Like they were showin’ Re-Runs
NOT THAT GOOD BUT STR8 PUNCH 6.5/10
ill knock u out the park farther than Bonds hittin "72"
strange how i could turn a vagina side ways, add eyes and mistake it for u
UH WOW NOT GOOD 6.5/10
I’m not playin games can't he get more Original with a Lamen Name
I actually think I’m your DNA the way you Say My Name In Vein
THIS WAS A AIGHT PUNCH LIKE HOW YOU USED WORDPLAY IN IT 8/10
He’ll have a Loss of Memory so his Brain Waves will be Idle Lines
I’ll have you in an Ambulance Reppin’ ya Hood then you’ll really Show Vital-Signs
IT WAS A DECENT CLOSER NOTHING SPECIAL 7/10

Overall: 7/10

Venom's Drop:

you finally got your verse done hooraayy//
if u asked me id say it took all day//
HAHA THAT WAS A WEAK PUNCH FOR A OPENER 5/10
leave this bitch in silence wit nuttin to say//
talkin bout hes my DNA but if he was then i'd be forced to be GAY//
UMM TOO MUCH HOMO PUNCHES GETTING OLD 5/10
dayum right im reppin in colorado, watch me let this go full throttle//
step to me again and you'll get yo head cracked wit a bottle//
WEAK NO WORDPLAY BASICALLY NOTHING 6/10
talkin bad about me dawg thats bad for your health//
im cuttin off your legs so ill have u lookin like an elf//
YOUR HALF-DECENT PUNCH HERE 7/10
leave this rap shit alone put your mic on the shelf//
ill leave you insane like, have u in tha frontlines tryin to battle yourself....
WEAK ASS CLOSER NO HATE BUT ITS TRUE 5.5/10

overall: 6/10

vote goes to: exogenious

uppin

uppin for votes

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ex: you had good flow good personals good punches.....saw a couple good meta's your structure wasnt the best but it was pretty dope..your opener was ok...your closer was better though...overall your shit was aiight

venom: wack u need to elevate and dont put / at the end of your lines put ..........you should atleast be able to put 5 "." if not then the line is probably too long..........bad punches bad personals........bad structure..elevate

vote: ex

i aint gon poll vote until u drop an honest explained vote in this battle http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132816

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