Zagreus vs Exogenious
 

10-20 lines
house rules
verse due tomarow at noon

All I know is that exo don't come close to a genius..
lets put our differences between us, like pamela u sucken penis'
I can already predict your rhyme will truley be shitty
cause on the rap level, we can hardly call your stuff 'witty'
It's kinda funny how you refer to tommorow at noon...
by that time you'll need be hand fed with a spoon
But it's cool cause your new, and i'm new too
don't be frightened if your thinkin 'what the fuck am I to do?'
well your through, its to late for any second thoughts
maybe a miracle could help but with you, probly not

iight nice flow, we all have to wait for tha count down to 12:00

yo i was working and just got home so i'll drop in 30 min

watchin this fool rap is an amazing feet
your production is shiny as your avi's beat(scratch)
get torn to pieces cuz i do this the titan way
and check the meaning of his name, truely GAY
its like you just fucked yourself like havin sex with mirrors
your name don't remine me of genious only the word queer
but i also mistake you for sigfread the way you and hide your frear
I Keep Stars in check like Astrologist when I'm merking groups
Ya elevation's like critical jobs cuz it has serious work to do
U worthless tool, you're awful so how you plan on beating the rawest
when ur battles are shit and ya wins equales ya losses

yo in the page i linked read the first and second link

u need to check up on your mythology exo, zagreus was zeus's son and was torn to peices, dionysus is the god that website is referring to.

tha break down

punches:ex.
flow:ex
wordplay:none
structure:both(kinda)
personals:both
overall:exogenious

exogenious go try out for verbal assassinz we lookin for some one like you click the link in my thread or just click here lol

i meant click tha link in my sig lol

ok i'll think about it...uppin for the votes

vote bitches

aight this battle goes to Zagreus....neitha battle was too good but he took it no doubt...Neitha one really had any line i would pick out of there verse as the best but I think that Z took this becuase he had better punches and his flow actually made more since in some ways

punches:Zag
flow:Zag
wordplay:neitha
structure:bout the same fa real
personals:Zag
overall:Zag
multies:neitha


this vote goes to Zagreus...........return the favor u know how we do....hit me up

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130117

(Exo, you called me a bitch indirectly. That's points off for you. lol)

Actually, I thought both y'all was weak. I thought y'all's structure was okay, world play sucked, originality sucked too, but Zag was funnier. Exo, your rhymes were a bit off so...

Vote goes to Zag.

lol
 

this a good battle, i think you both have same skills so it was hard to choose... but zagreus pimped ya with the link and your name is truly gay cause its linked to a gay web site... good battle tho..

my bad
 

i mean im voten for exogenious he the one makin fun of zag...