VALOR vs C.M.F.S
 

10 lines
blind spit
no feeding
no hate,crew,or d/r votes
45 minutes

Checkin-in................................................

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since i started the battle in another thread i'll throw this down anyway
good luck....middleweight...holy shit

i wil lyrically destroy you
use you like a diaper and soil you
sorry bout your plans... they're spoiled to
coz this is what... i enjoy to do
new here hey...welcome have a nice day
hold up...what the fuck did i say
you cant be serious...with shit like that
man your delerious...you been on the crack
speakin of fearin us...how wacks your act
VALOR is here with us...but he just got sacked

homeboy's rymes will get destroyed terribly..
get done hearing my rymes you be needing therapy..
you can take notes by reading my lines so read on..
my rymes be hittin you like a missle from viatnom..
you get sonned like a herb ,im startin to think it your ritual..
my rymes are extrordinary ill merk you and make it official..
gettin lit smashed and hit,thinkin your nice but your lines are shit..
have this kid cry'in and ballin rollin over throwin fits..
your rymes are poor and my lines are rich..
you cant land one punch so ill k-o you and treat ya like a bitch..

all basic lines but hoeully my wordplay got'tem

C.M.F.S .:vs:. VALOR
 

this is what i originally post coz i said i would spit first...

Double you aitch...ay fuckin tee / what the fuck...you wanna battle me
ok folks... you seen the line up / no more jokes...he's been deny-in us
confess to-nite...you ain't got shit / you just wanna bite... what i fukin spit
broke ass bitch.../ throwin lines for money
check out this.../ your rhymes ain't funny
give it up...your not what it takes / get over there...with the rest of the fakes
here's the stakes...i win you loose / first mistake...you should of refused
but what the fuck...holy crap / didn't get to hear...this guy rap
you know tho...i just been thinkin / wait up ho...this guys sinking
in shit this deep / man fuck that's sick-ning

but since he started a new thread at the same time i was postin this
i just made that other shit up...

anyway uppin for votes on this battle...

if i could get that battle thread droped it would be good
coz i'd probly use it again...

Lmao...peeps Dont Worry Bout My Wack Verse But Could You Blame Me After Reading C.m.f.s's Verse Rofl

Uppin Number 1

C.M.F.S. .:vs:. VALOR
 

hey ya'll...
what's your name again... oh that's right valor

mate i laugh my fuckin ass off too...

if i was gonna vote on this battle i probly wouldn't vote for you

not sayin mine was good... but shit take a look at yours

by the 4th line you already said rhymes 3 times

thoughout the whole thing you said rhymes 5 times

( i mean it's only ten lines that's a lot of rhymes )

i thought it was about rhyming... not using the same word because it rhymes

no hate man but if ya gonna say shit like that take a look at yourself...

Your A Herb....when I Win This 5-0
Im Gonna Laugh At You Okay?

I'm votin for Valor on this battle. C.M.F.S. yo verse was just really weak. It was predictable. Valor yo verse was "great" or nuthin special but it was enough to beat C.M.F.S. You had better punches and structure. Vote - Valor

Return tha favor link in my sig.

VALOR vs C.M.F.S
 

uppin for votes... i say vote on the second one coz thats the one i originaly posted but since he set another battle i posted that other shit

Im voting yes on Valor cuz his shit was hard and other dudes shit was toy...

For Instance...Check out valors shit:
homeboy's rymes will get destroyed terribly..
get done hearing my rymes you be needing therapy..
you can take notes by reading my lines so read on..
my rymes be hittin you like a missle from viatnom..

This was his opener, rawer than CMFS... Although his verse was about how his rhymes would be hittin him... it was more than better than what the other guy said...

Check this out....
Double you aitch...ay fuckin tee / what the fuck...you wanna battle me
ok folks... you seen the line up / no more jokes...he's been deny-in us
confess to-nite...you ain't got shit / you just wanna bite... what i fukin spit
broke ass bitch.../ throwin lines for money
check out this.../ your rhymes ain't funny
give it up...your not what it takes / get over there...with the rest of the fakes

I wont go on... And this is his "ORIGINAL VERSE" it still sucked, especially when he did the broke ass bitch part... i was high as fuck jus laughin at how can he is...
Vote: Valor

uppin number 3
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homeboy's rymes will get destroyed terribly..
get done hearing my rymes you be needing therapy..
AVERAGE LINE 6/10
you can take notes by reading my lines so read on..
my rymes be hittin you like a missle from viatnom..
HAHA NICE PUNCH 7/10
you get sonned like a herb ,im startin to think it your ritual..
my rymes are extrordinary ill merk you and make it official..
GOOD RHYME SCHEME AND VOCAB 7/10
gettin lit smashed and hit,thinkin your nice but your lines are shit..
have this kid cry'in and ballin rollin over throwin fits..
GOOD BUT BAD STRUCTURE 7/10
your rymes are poor and my lines are rich..
you cant land one punch so ill k-o you and treat ya like a bitch..
6/10 GOOD ENDER
33/50 OVERALL
Double you aitch...ay fuckin tee / what the fuck...you wanna battle me
ok folks... you seen the line up / no more jokes...he's been deny-in us
BAD STRUCUTRE BAD RHYME 3/10
confess to-nite...you ain't got shit / you just wanna bite... what i fukin spit
broke ass bitch.../ throwin lines for money
BAD FLOW BAD STRUCTURE 2/10
check out this.../ your rhymes ain't funny
give it up...your not what it takes / get over there...with the rest of the fakes
BAD 4/10
here's the stakes...i win you loose / first mistake...you should of refused
but what the fuck...holy crap / didn't get to hear...this guy rap
TERRIBLE PUNCH TERRIBLE LINE 1/10
you know tho...i just been thinkin / wait up ho...this guys sinking
in shit this deep / man fuck that's sick-ning
UR BEST LINE 5/10
OVERALL V/ VALOR ONE SIDED BATTLE

uppin number 4.........
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Uppin Number 5 Comeon 2 Votes Are Needed
So Ge Ur Lazy Asses In Here