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Froboy .VS. Immortal_Souljah04
rules are:
6 bars (12 lines) 1 hour to spit (check for corrections & changing) no one goes first no hate/crew votes no biting no recycling |
Yo my nigga i just counted my death toll
found out it was one million including imortal soul in da streetz i can bake any nigga from any fuckin set but right now ill fry yo puck ass on the internet Steppin to me nigga wat do u think I heard about tuffa dudes dat be wearin pink Ya shit says hardcore even as a baby Dats a fuckin neva not even a maby Dog i dont know u bout ill still be shady kick o punk ass den rape yo lady And im only 15, who da fuck knew ill end dis wit good bye and screw you BIOTCH |
hmm lil bitch ass wannabe emcee pimpin' on the ladies but who knew?//
but he loving everything to do with "All the small things' like Blink-182// (All The Small Thing's is a song by Blink-182) two muthafuckin' posts and this cats already dealing with a middleweight// this cat be typing rhymes but ain't got a mic another sign of sedate// haha boy pimpin' in your profile but you ain't know what to do in bed// got less fuckin' ~props~ than that bitch Paris Hilton no fuckin' cred// FroBoy is the your real name I don't don't know "Because I Got High"// punkass version of Afroman ummm ok homey I juss wanna ask fuckin' why?// only fifteen bitch you still older than me but I got better rhymes// I don't even know why I'm battling you, you ain't worth the time// blah! blah! blah! dropped a really weak one after I saw yo spit// you got whack diseases like AIDS its contaminated get away don't transmit// whatever not feeling this one^^^...... |
uppin 4 votes up in this bitch dont sleep on this & leave links after you vote
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ayo my vote goes to soulja he had more disses his punches were harder
fro had a nice flow to though vote goes to immortal soulja |
Froboy that wuz a nice flow
But Immortal had way more punch lines He came way harder He went 4 the throat Fro boy u should of just came correct But I'll still be checkin if u can drop harder Much respect to both Mc's My vote: Immortal Soldier Holla! |
aights thanks for the votes uppin' tho need a lot more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
leave links if you want me to drop a honest vote on yours aight. |
ayo my vote goes to soulja he had more disses his punches were harder
JUS LIKE THIS CAT SAID, U MESSIN WITH A VET, WITH A MEASLEY 2 POST FRO-- U GOTTA ELEVATE ON RHYME SCHEME THATS IT. DONT TAKE IT PERSONAL. YA NEED HELP PM ME.. MY V/ SOULJA |
Y U Stacken Ya Winz Offa Newbs.............................................
Jus Wonderin |
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froboy.. you need to start working on vocabulary and metaphores so that your rhymes are more complex. immortal nice verse.. you need to improve some on multi's.... dont waste your time on less talented opponants.
vote:immortal |
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they're the only ones accepting my battles and challenging me. |
well uppin 4 votes need more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!
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yeah i have 2 say souljah won diz battle hands up & dat'z it
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Black Thief vs. Don lol...ok heres tha break down Yo my nigga i just counted my death toll found out it was one million including imortal soul ^^ummm that was a sorry ass opener...one million wins?come on6/10 in da streetz i can bake any nigga from any fuckin set but right now ill fry yo puck ass on the internet this couldve been a lot better...nothing really hit 5/10 Steppin to me nigga wat do u think I heard about tuffa dudes dat be wearin pink this shit just gets sorrier as I read it 4/10 Ya shit says hardcore even as a baby Dats a fuckin neva not even a maby well...at least u attempted to use a personal 6/10 Dog i dont know u bout ill still be shady kick o punk ass den rape yo lady lol...u need much elevation 5/10 And im only 15, who da fuck knew ill end dis wit good bye and screw you BIOTCH overall I give u a 5/10..... hmm lil bitch ass wannabe emcee pimpin' on the ladies but who knew?// but he loving everything to do with "All the small things' like Blink-182// (All The Small Thing's is a song by Blink-182) ummm I wasnt really feeling this as a opener.....5/10 two muthafuckin' posts and this cats already dealing with a middleweight// this cat be typing rhymes but ain't got a mic another sign of sedate// ok line...kinda seem like a filler in the second line 6/10 haha boy pimpin' in your profile but you ain't know what to do in bed// got less fuckin' ~props~ than that bitch Paris Hilton no fuckin' cred// this line made me chuckle....7/10 FroBoy is the your real name I don't don't know "Because I Got High"// punkass version of Afroman ummm ok homey I juss wanna ask fuckin' why?// this was another filler....6/10 only fifteen bitch you still older than me but I got better rhymes// I don't even know why I'm battling you, you ain't worth the time// lol...another funny line 6/10 blah! blah! blah! dropped a really weak one after I saw yo spit// you got whack diseases like AIDS its contaminated get away don't transmit// weak closer....6/10 whatever not feeling this one^^^...... overall I give u a 7/10 cause even though ya lines were a lil soft....fro's was just blatantly weak....both of u need to come up some more...or maybe it was yall's off day...i dunno....stay up and keep battling...Uno |
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