Big Bad Wolf VS. da pimp
 

:shoot: Rulez
no biting
no recycling
no crew :gfy:
Lets do dis bitch you 1st

yo/how you wana get smashed/i will whip your punk ass and take your cash/im the ghost from christmas past/and im here to destroy your bitch ass/your a perverb peeper/and im the grim reeaper/your as scared as a mouse/the big bad wolf cant blow down my brick house/im bout to win and not by the hair on my chine chin chin.

Dog yo flow rolls like a fuckin car wit flat tires
And ya spit is fucked up like da speach of a drunk driver
I spit wit acid saliva
While you say you pimp hos, i burn holes
Nigga im still cold as ice and hot as charcoal
I got one question what the fuck is a chine
Bitch you cant spit ya shit dont even fuckin rhyme
Dog ya spit is so dry ya bottem lip gets chapped
You better respect me bitch before dis fake pimp gets bitch slapped
And when ya feel my prescence ya better not make a fuckin peep
Cuz my status is high enough to take yo freedom a speech

You little bitch

ayo lil weak wolf did you fa get to battle me or somethin man, write ya fuckn verse or get dq'ed

Ay im uppin for votes on dis and...

Big Bad Wolf VS. Blue Water

help a brotha out

fuck this this was shitty all around
both of yall take some freestylin lesssons

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Ay we need votes for dis. DOnt sleep on tha better emcee.

Whew....Where to start?

Both of ya'll need to elevate, seriously. Punchlines are weak. Work on your structures.

Pimp:

You need to learn how to rhyme and work on your structure.
Overall: 3/10

Big Bad Wolf:

Your verses were okay, not the greatest i've seen from you, you can do better than that.
Overall:6/10

Vote: BBW

Ay thanks for the vote on dis. Im still uppin da pimp aint no pimp. let me show em dat.

yo i cant vote yet but ima give my oppinion any way. both was aite for some new shit. but ya got some serious elevating to do. if i was you i would start by working on my structure, so you no basically what is gonna be like before you start justwriting aload of shit..
any way i think that overall the wolf took this one cus his was better structured and had an alrite flow. youy both need to work on making it more personal about the person you dissing. pimp keep working on it ull get to the level you wanna be at soon.

vote = wolf
like i said i cant vote yet but if this battle still aint done by the time i get my post up ill come back and hit it..

while you waiting hit gis battle up with a fair vote
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130569

Thax still uppin for votes. I know i slaughtered dis fag.

Uppin

^^^im goin' to have to agree on that cuz Pimp you need to fix your structure was line the shit up don't type it like u typin a paragraph 'n' shit...BBW..yo verses was ok..yo punches could have been a little bit harder..& yo structure was aight...keep elevating..my vote goes to BiG BaD WoLF...{peace}

v/ BBW

flow, punches, and everything~big bad 5/10 ok verse

Da pimp u suck majorly Elevate like hell

return fav on my battles

V/ Big bad

damn
 

not tryin to dick right, bbw you got this.. pimp you need to trip on shit, tooo borin readin it, not tryin to hate, but put shit down we wanna hear