Jus some shit ta introduce myself, my first Thread Holla!
 

I got no love fa muthafuckas wit guns, cuz all I hear niggas talk is how they lay u in chalk/ Don't we got other topics besides shootin and killin/ Bein down with tha homies doesn't make u a villian/ Yall so quick to say how ya bust a cap/ Like a wrestla get down on ya knees and tap/ Ya self out tha game, like Lil-flip its ova/ Like a retired M.C. ya name should be J-Hova/ Misstress of tha game, done fucked plenty/ Niggas already, know what they should give me/ And bitches too, I ain't gone leave yall out/ I too put tits in my mouth/ If you don't like what I'm sayin/ then go tell ya moms/ cuz I prolly get mo pussy than most of yall...........

i expect some negative feed back but ya know what, I WELCOME IT ALL, I APPRECIATE ANYONE WHO READS IT. :)

i like sum of ur lines in it like don't we have otha topics besides shootin & killin; hanging wit da homies don't make u a villian all da way up 2 mistress of da game has fucced many u got da skill but keep at it & u'll reach ur tru potential keep flowing ma

Thankx Vicious, I appreciate u takin the time out to peep. Peace!

yo, thatz kew an sum linez r good, no doubt:thumbup: good job sum linez weren't so good tho....elevatin iz wut u needa do, just like the resta uz, again, nice job

Respect, Respect, nice lines, original style....
Not tryin' to preach but try extendin' your metaphors

I was fed ephedrine waay before It was against federal law!

ummm 5/10 sum stuff was good sum stuff wasnt

Thankx guys for the feed back , I will take heed to it all. Peace
!

I just like the fact u said that...it was kinda basic but still good.

it was pretty good ma just keep workin and elevate i liked 60% of tha flow tho