TheOne vs. lil scrappy
 

yo
20 linez max
due 30min afta chek in
u spit first
no krew hate or d.r votez, gl man peace, all the best to ya :thumbup:

checkn in, peace gl,....................

aight man u got about 16 minz left to spit b4 ur out by default, an thatz not how i like to win so letz go man. i wanna get sum feedbak but i need u to spit before i kan so i'll get ma feedbak

Accept’n this battle ya ass’ll get smashed and broke//
This a flashback to 8mile, this boi wont spit he’ll choke//
Back out while u still can, or just do what you choose//
When it comes down to ya decision, no matter wut You lose//
Battle’n this lil girl, who idolize’s charlies angels//
Lil scrappy wont take no shit, who leave ya rhymes to dangle//
After my rhymes leave this bitch dead, nobody’s gonna miss em//
He raps like *shes* a lil girl who was born with down syndrom//
After I enter this, ima get out my chair and pull off a victory dance//
Cause by the look of some of ya other rhymes, this whore aint gotta chance//
This lyrical gun will kill ya, I don’t even gotz to shoot it//
Im still only cockn the shit back, and u been gone like your music//
TheOne, loves these forums, she wish’s to be noticed and seen//
“Uh one day I hope to beat lil scrappy, and be crownd tha queen”//
Never gonna happen, cause im tha rap god, and yous tha rap devil//
You still far from ever move’n up in tha ladder, to become in my level//
Murk’n your ass in this battle, it was short but fun…//
So now I say my last words to end this shit, REST IN PEACE TheOne//

R.i.P.
TheOne

aight yo, chekin in

thiz battle iz on an gone, in a blink of an eye
thiz battle wuz spun, now wun, i don't gotta try
newb, u gotta lot to learn an i'll tell u y
sit down an listen before u fukin die
now wut u gonna do? but listen that iz
all u kna do to me iz swing, but alwayz mizz
itz no good unless u kna connect, like me
an weneva i konnect itz like runnin inta a fukin tree!
hard an strong, a lil fat too but thatz ok
an wen i hit u, u have no choice but to lay
man u one sik mutha, if u elevate
but thatz no problem, u kan be betta then me if u escalate
an concentrate on the goal at hand which u just failed to do
u stood up an now u sit down again, itz like the story of Ja Ru
Rule sorry, ma bad, that fukaz pretty sad
he straight up suz, get hiz shit writtin fo him, which makez real EmCeez mad
but i'm glad to think i'm betta then a man who made it there
an thinkin of that fact, how could any smart nicca care?
but thiz battle iz on an gone, jus like Ja the fool
thiz battle iz spun an wun, i fukin Rule

aight yo uppin fo votez, hit thiz up an leave uz luinkz an we'll hit u up, eh lil scrappy, good job man i think u gotta winna, nicely dun, PPL!! LEAVE HONEST FEEDBAK!! ON THIZ BATTLE!!!!

ayo, lets get some votes, i'll return tha favor.

TheOne .:vs:. lil scrapy
 

i'm gonna vote on this battle coz both these guys wanted to battle
so it's gotta be fair

lil scrapy- you had a bigger verse with harder punches
more consistant with flow and rhyming was good

TheOne- your verse was good but not as consistant as srcaps
was a little cut short in some places and not as much flow...
good rhyming tho...

overall- good work by both

vote- lil scrapy... punches

keep up the good work

both of them didnt come hard or flow but i am gonna give it 2 lil scrappy he came wit a good opener and closer he had some punches but not that good of punches

umm to the other guy u need to elevate more and u woulda had this one~one~

v/scrap

Lil scrappy straight up, y'all.

I couldn't even understand what the other dude was writing... Neither of you came hard, flowed well, or was even funny. But lil scrappy bested out of you too.

vote- lil scrappy

RETURN THE VOTING FAVORS Y'ALL

the one - Ur verse did'nt capture me and Ur ryme style was a lil off. vocabulary and imagination needs tremendouse work. U cant just say U'll kill some body and thats it these days. niggaz wanna know how Ur gonna do it, maybe when and other shit like that. quik creativity will take U a long way. U did o.k. but if a word rymes and does'nt have any refrence to wat Ur trying to say, the smart thing would be not to use it. there is "ALWAYS" another word that would fit better. An EMCE, is one who'll luk for it.

Lil Scrappy - U did a little better, not good enouf to be praised as U'll see in the next few votes that r to come and probably lead to Ur victory. Ur victory dance line got my laufin though, I was thinkin of niggaz Playin Madden and shit. Im stupid like that, but anyways. the same thing I said to theone, may apply to U and a lot of MCs in this site. U were luky this time, but luk aint gonna stop the next nigga from runnin thru U. ass thes niggaz wud say. U need to elivate.

V/ Lil Scrappy

letz get these last few votes, i'll return tha favors! jus vote honestly. Peace.

Lil scrappy, you ain't returning thr favors. :cussing:

can we get some votes everybody? i wanna battles some people, and i got 5 battles already, so lets end this one, i return tha favors.

Lil-Nice spit you come to the site pretty good
even though your lines was stretched you was hott
and had a few things

The One-Your lines was way stretched and didnt really
have anything like simlies or metpaphores or even
personals, Both keep elevatin

v/Scrappy