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lil scrappy vs. Ill is it?
alrite lets agree on some rules,
since we both noobs still, if ya wanna call me that, how bout 10 lines max? no crew/hate votes.. 30 min. to spit after check in? wut ya think? |
aight, sounds good. im checkin in now, ill drop within 10
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absolutely shit is all this guy can doo, hes just a lil scrappy//
hes accepted hes crappy, losing is what makes him happy// if your all that why the fuck woulda ya live in trillville?// i guess its simple, hes not good enough for the town of skill// youve entered four battles and aint got a result// i wont bother depening the wound, ima just add salt// now your shaken, not stirred, now hurry up and awaken// look round, your eyes aint blurred, youll see its ya woman ive taken// ill start a crew, add theone, nerves and smokey joe// we through punches, you just managed a hokey poke// |
alrite, im startn now, peace.
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In this battle, ya ass is goin down like the world trade//
And tha people that died, is playn the words that u made// I hate to put it lyke that, but that’s just the way its runnin// Cause you rhymes cant compare to mine, to me there nothin// No offence to tha others, but your crew would be wack// Cuz theone, nerves and smokey joe could do better than that// I doubt them boys want to be mentioned in ya rhymes// Probley got them changing their names, I know I’d change mine// Im end this battle the way I always do, Like a beast// You were just beat bitch, now REST IN PEACE// R.i.P. Ill is it? |
And rest in pieces this dude does, scrappy.
It was close y'all, but scrappy's verse appealed to me more. But I know he could do beter n that. It's just that he hit harder, and was a little funnier than you were Ill. vote- scrappy |
ill vote on this if yall vote on round two me an verbal.
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Scrappy took that easily ill is it need to work on his lyrics
vote-scrappy not enough posts to actually vote |
lil scrapy .:vs:. Ill is it
scrapy-you had a lot more funnier shit there
and yours was a little harder... ill is it-you need to come a bit better. not bad tho pretty good structure... vote- lil scrapy |
scrappy took diz 1 by far wit mo appealing & convincing shit 2 say otha den ill
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ay letz get them damn votes, i'll return tha favor everybody.Peace.
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scrappy took this one... just dont put that many multis.. and u need some flow man.. i was sorta lost at ya first 4 lines...
i wont bother depening the wound, ima just add salt// now your shaken, not stirred, now hurry up and awaken// look round, your eyes aint blurred, youll see its ya woman ive taken// ill is it.. those were ur only lines that were good.. your whole verse has to be good not part of it.. anyways vote-- LIL SCRAPPY |
sorry i cant edit my post but can u hit up my sig ... my battle is being slept on.. thank you
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Ill Is It's DROP
absolutely shit is all this guy can doo, hes just a lil scrappy// hes accepted hes crappy, losing is what makes him happy// OK THAT WAS A WEAK ASS OPENER 4.5/10 if your all that why the fuck woulda ya live in trillville?// i guess its simple, hes not good enough for the town of skill// WEAK AGAIN 5/10 youve entered four battles and aint got a result// i wont bother depening the wound, ima just add salt// HAHA NOT EVEN GOOD ENOUGH FOR ME TO WIPE MY SHIT WITH 3/10 now your shaken, not stirred, now hurry up and awaken// look round, your eyes aint blurred, youll see its ya woman ive taken// WEAK NOT FEELING 5.5/10 ill start a crew, add theone, nerves and smokey joe// we through punches, you just managed a hokey poke// WHAT THE FUCK HOKEY POKE????? 4/10 OVERALL:4.5/10///45% lil scrappy's DROP: In this battle, ya ass is goin down like the world trade// And tha people that died, is playn the words that u made// AIGHT OPENER BETTER THAN ILL'S 6.5/10 I hate to put it lyke that, but that’s just the way its runnin// Cause you rhymes cant compare to mine, to me there nothin// NOT A GOOD PUNCH 6/10 No offence to tha others, but your crew would be wack// Cuz theone, nerves and smokey joe could do better than that// WEAK BUT YOU USED HIS NAME AGAINST HIM 6/10 I doubt them boys want to be mentioned in ya rhymes// Probley got them changing their names, I know I’d change mine// I WOULD CHANGE IT TOO....BUT WEAK 5/10 Im end this battle the way I always do, Like a beast// You were just beat bitch, now REST IN PEACE// OK YOU USE THAT CLOSER TOO MUCH LOSE POINTS FOR THAT 6/10 OVERALL:6/10///60% VOTE GOES TO: LIL SCRAPPY. |
DAMN! Poison who is that bitch in that poster? she is so thick.
anyways, i give the battle to scrappy. i think that he insulted the other dude pretty bad, plus i think that "Ill is it" kinda has a nursery rhyme flow, i'm not really feeling it. i give this to lil scrappy..... |
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