Rascal 'vs' Most Wanted
 

normal rules..
6-8 bars..
3-0 KO
3-1 TKO..
due Monday Midnight GMT..
Bizatch..
pz.

in this like a Yes...

U claim u veteran champ
But evryone knows u a veteran tramp

Ya names Rascal(haha) I dont mean to be cruel
A name like that sounds like ya raps need to be in pre-school

U think u hott? Nigga ya colder than a popsicle
Fuckin wit me u get popped easier than poppin' pimples(haha)

Steppin up 2 me?, wake up and stop dreamin
After I fucked his mom, he wanted be first to slirp my semen(fagget)

U need 2 just get on the corner and start rappin 4 cents
If rappin wuz basketball u stuck on the side ridin' the bench

I step on ya career easier than I step on ants
Rascal u a girl, save up ya money and get some breast implants(haha)

Ok hear we have Gay Folks Most Wanted..
But when it comes to rapbattles your Raps Mos Unwanted..
Your a dude who always get's pissed over..
Your like a bowlin Pin because your getting Bowled over..
Sick little kid peeping another dudes dick..
Only way you could ever toch my skill,
Is if you were in my mouth posing as a tooth pick..
Load fist with food like it was a packed lunch..
Just so i can say i hit you when i pack a punch..
This is a battle but I swear it could be a comedy..
You either a shitty wack rapper or an awesome drama-queen..
And the Conclusion.. MW= Herb.. with wack punches..AKA No Hoper..
End It with Dopeness.. put no lid on your coffin.. B/c you don't deserve a closer..

OK! that wuz iight
but we'll see how the results turn out

uppin this for some votes..
leave a link or 2 i will vote on it..

Rascal- You had the structure which was good and the punches
were hard 'n' shit...and they landed...and tha flow was nice

Most Wanted- You hardly had anything cuz your structure was bad
and u need to stretch ur line out a little bit more so it can get the flow
'n' shit

Overall- Rascal took this one...practically merk'd MW plus his punches were harder than MW's..

Vote= Rascal

That was alright battle...before i vote vote up on my battle between Spitilicious and dacrozofHB...

iight you guys both had some lines that didnt rap..lets see..Rascal had more multis and the punches were a little harder....Most wanted you just have to up ya game a little more,...

Vote-Rascal

[cener]thanx for the votes i hit that battle already.. Votes will be nice and ill hit up your battle..[/center]

most wanted you had an OK verse but it was mostly simple lines and that doesnt win battles you gotta be more complex...you had 1 good punch but besides that you need to elevate alot...use wordplay and multies and meta's and of course personals and harder punches and fix ya structure a little

overall : 4/10

rascal you had a decent verse too...it started out weak but gained momentum and the last 2 bars were sik so good shyt right there...you should use more multies and wordplay too...and also fix ya structure a lil try to make the lines as even as possible
not:

".........................................."
".................................................. ..........................."

that makes the verse lose interest...decent verse

overall : 6/10

vote: rascal

~!1!~

tha break down

punches:rascal
flow:both
wordplay:none
structure:rascal
personals:both
overall:rascal

now poll on mine and i'll poll on yours lol........ the cycle of life.....lol

i'll be nice and poll now

Dam i like your closer rascal. good punch and you had good flow and decent humor. overall that was a good verse...
fav. line
And the Conclusion.. MW= Herb.. with wack punches..AKA No Hoper..
End It with Dopeness.. put no lid on your coffin.. B/c you don't deserve a closer..

but yo i could give a monkeys uncle to structure cuz in real flows you dont see stucture...
7/10

MW...that verse was a good verse...
had ok punches and some flow...
fav. line
Ya names Rascal(haha) I dont mean to be cruel
A name like that sounds like ya raps need to be in pre-school

keep the (this out of your verse) it not only looks gay but it is gay....
5/10

vote~rascal