RapVerse.com Community - **tournament match** j-poll vs. unholywun

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**tournament match** j-poll vs. unholywun

deadlines:
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check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
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Yo hold it down for BluePrint JPOLL..............

Check Van wtf Kid dont post here.

here it is...put this verse in legends...

unholy wun or mental anew or whatever kid...your done...

First up you were a hipocrit, your name was Unholy yet ya had a cross by your name...
Now your embarassed, even admitting you need A-New Mental frame...
FUCK! to him 'TAC-TICS' are the sound of a clock that needs repairs...
Says ill legal ain't fair, cause to them hes like a tire in the trunk, just a spare..
Been on a month, yet threatens to ban people? Your propagandas doctrinated...
FREEPOSTING bitch, fuck off you and that 10 year old in your sig are related..
Scared of real comments so he posted a baby picture, that's priceless...
But i'm making your stretched confidence feel the way it feels when your kind is riceless...
Mental thinks a permutation was a bad hair day, he's just a bitch stray...
Thinks Arabs and Indians are the same? that's like saying a cow fuckin 'Neeiigghhs'...
Kid thinks the theory of 'relative-vity' was about his family tree...
He's just plain wackness,his cemetarys 'Dead Ahead', and yes rb agrees...

Ight

Strap Power Lines on ur head and This Poll couldnt be Electric..
So Full of shit kids a Tank How his Verse's are all Sceptic..
Tiger Ava Ur name isnt Tony ur Just another Frosted Flake..
"Leave"in the Tourny Sweepin u up You can call me The Rake..
Writers Block?Only way u get a Punch is By Hitten ur Key-board..
You thought u were in Herbville with ur Crew u got Detoured..
He must be 2% Fat Milk with Played Lines when do those Expire..
Light his Head A blaze and You still couldnt try and Think Fire..
Those Played lines are Historic did u find them on a Cave Wall..
High on Ur Horse Lets see How Hard My KO will make u Fall..
Lets Just "W"rap-It-Up Like this Kid was a BET HotLine..
You wanted to See my Verse

<<Well Heres Your Sign..

I shouldnt need to explain

i can't believe you used a hotline bar haha....is that a joke seriously...and you said that my shit was play in three lines....when have you heard of puns as clever as mine... you probably don't even get my puns...dick head...jokes no hate

Lol try and Sway but u got owned :)

VOTES VOTES VOTES...you're missing my legendary verse people

Quote:

Originally Posted by JPoll

First up you were a hipocrit, your name was Unholy yet ya had a cross by your name...
Now your embarassed, even admitting you need A-New Mental frame...
good personals in both lines and u played off his name...if i were u..u shud of said he is stupid rather than a hipocrit, i think it would of seemed harder, but nice line.

FUCK! to him 'TAC-TICS' are the sound of a clock that needs repairs...
Says ill legal ain't fair, cause to them hes like a tire in the trunk, just a spare..
good..showing hes stupid and that hes pointless to his crew, nice...that spare tire isnt played but its hardly original...but still good meta.

Been on a month, yet threatens to ban people? Your propagandas doctrinated...
FREEPOSTING bitch, fuck off you and that 10 year old in your sig are related..
you could of used that in a different way, but still good coz its personal and witty.
Scared of real comments so he posted a baby picture, that's priceless...
But i'm making your stretched confidence feel the way it feels when your kind is riceless...
..is he Indian? If he is this was sort of good but if hes not I dont get the whole riceless line.

Mental thinks a permutation was a bad hair day, he's just a bitch stray...
Thinks Arabs and Indians are the same? that's like saying a cow fuckin 'Neeiigghhs'...
^newbie like, but coz of that he said sumthin along those lines that Arabs and Indians are the same I think its decent. But wack meta.

Kid thinks the theory of 'relative-vity' was about his family tree...
He's just plain wackness,his cemetarys 'Dead Ahead', and yes rb agrees...
ok wordplay, not bad closer but not amazing.

This had decent wit alot of personals and the punches were averagely hard. But the personals you had make this a solid verse.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mental Anew

Strap Power Lines on ur head and This Poll couldnt be Electric..
So Full of shit kids a Tank How his Verse's are all Sceptic..
First line was an ok play of his name...werent feeling the 2nd line.

Tiger Ava Ur name isnt Tony ur Just another Frosted Flake..
"Leave"in the Tourny Sweepin u up You can call me The Rake..
wack wordplay

Writers Block?Only way u get a Punch is By Hitten ur Key-board..
You thought u were in Herbville with ur Crew u got Detoured..
should of said these lines the other way around. ut w/e...first line was ok 2nd was basic.

He must be 2% Fat Milk with Played Lines when do those Expire..
Light his Head A blaze and You still couldnt try and Think Fire..
fire lines are played out and that 2nd line was ok. average.

Those Played lines are Historic did u find them on a Cave Wall..
High on Ur Horse Lets see How Hard My KO will make u Fall..
this was ok....nufin special...1st line was sorta decent but the 2nd line was average, no complexity.

Lets Just "W"rap-It-Up Like this Kid was a BET HotLine..
You wanted to See my Verse

<<Well Heres Your Sign..
like didnt work...but dam...it says its a pm...u cud of used this better..nota good closer.

None of this had wit, it wasnt funny to read. You had personals but u didnt use them hard enough. Your wording was pretty poor aswell, it wasnt a great verse.

I shouldnt need to explain

Jpoll took it because he had PERSONALS, WIT and Harder punches. Dont moan Mental, because for someone so arrogant you have such little skill, so dont reply that i dont know what im talkin about coz he beat u in pretty much everyway. Also J, this wasnt legendary. good verse though :)

Vote Jpoll.

Lol ill moan b/c i killed him.

uppin uppin uppin......................

This battle was horrible. Both people sucked ass....

Vote - JPoll for not changing his sig/avatar/name/etc after he saw his opponent's verse

Lol he didnt have anytihng on my sig and ava unless he pre-wrote i didnt have the girl in when he dropped.