Dissonance vs. Mixtape
 

12 lines or 6 bars
First to 5 votes wins
No feeding, recycling, biting, or bitching
If you have a problem, discuss it like a man, don't bitch

Due date is tonight Midnight on West Coast time

Checkin in....i'll drop soon.................1......

Checkin In...i'll be dropping in prolly 5 minutes (gotta finish dinner ya know)

I’ve read up on your shit and see your sick-and-got-true-steez,
but I didn’t-know-you’d-be spittin-so-rudely as to pick-on-a-newbie
And that means that you’d be just another "slut"; as I fix-the-term-"loosely"
It’s proved the true way to say "Hi" is with a "spliff-an-some-doobies

Who’d have thought my first battle would be the with the rookie-of-the-month
I’d have "grilled you up and ate you" before you ever could have "took-me-out-to-lunch"
You’re shook punk, but no amount of shaking is waking you up from this-dream
To find you I just follow the "yellow brick road"…otherwise known as your "piss-stream"

I "stole yer dictionary" and left you "lost for words" like tourists-without-a-map
Yer win’s as likely as loosing weight at Wendy’s, you’re sure-but-I-doubt-you-can
Like an anorexic girl in a buffet line this kid can’t seem to finish what he-started
only reason your "legally ill" is cuz doctors diagnosed you "mentally retarted"

Iam drop in like 20min.....i had to drop another verse in another battle sorry almost forgot bout this....aight 1

Yo fake ass gangsta , rap sounds better when lines rhyme…
You crossed the path from rap ta bull shit, and thats not even a fine line…
My divine rhyme is prime time, I'll put this nigga ta sleep…
My figures of speech send a message my trigger repeats…
I live fa disease, I'm the incredible sound flowa…
I'm makin the Brooklyn Niggas Known with enough spit I could drown Noah…
I'm suprised you worked up the guts to even mumble a diss…
This from a man who dropped an album and the impact crumbled the disc…
Diss is the best,(NAH) I'm not humble a bit…
When I start rumble'n shit, you gonna stumble and slip…
Fumble and trip,I put whole troops to sleep…
You shoulda known before you battled you would lose to me...

Aight, this battle looks hot to me. Go ahead and vote up kids

Uppin this post for some voting to get started.

Uppin This

LMAO!! Damn, this battle was tight and funny yo. :laughs: Dissonance, brah, I gotta give you yah props on this. Yo lines cracked up:

You’re shook punk, but no amount of shaking is waking you up from this-dream
To find you I just follow the "yellow brick road"…otherwise known as your "piss-stream"
***HAR
I "stole yer dictionary" and left you "lost for words" like tourists-without-a-map
Yer win’s as likely as loosing weight at Wendy’s, you’re sure-but-I-doubt-you-can
Like an anorexic girl in a buffet line this kid can’t seem to finish what he-started
only reason your "legally ill" is cuz doctors diagnosed you "mentally retarted"
***Loved this, though it was kinda stretched

Mixtape, yah did yah thang too brah:
Yo fake ass gangsta , rap sounds better when lines rhyme…
You crossed the path from rap ta bull shit, and thats not even a fine line…
***The opening line was whack but you made up for it with the second. And it ain't a fine line from rap to bull shit! :laugh:
I live fa disease, I'm the incredible sound flowa…
I'm makin the Brooklyn Niggas Known with enough spit I could drown Noah…
*** Drown Noah. LMAO

Whew, that was a hot battle. Really close but, I'm going to have to give it to:

Dissonance

an off the bat, no antizipation of reading my post unless u need to lol...
v/Diss..

i like the way everyline was a punch, that was hot.. and you rhyme scheme was good to..

Vocab:tied(no one stood out more than the other)
Flow:to me it was close.. but i liked Diss flow al little better..
Punches: definatly Diss.. had quite a bit in there
Personals:DIss.. disses werent all general..
Metas:Mixtape

Mixtape you did ya thang, but you didnt come hard wit punches like Diss did..
if my vote counts it goes to Dissonance.
holla

Uppin...thanks for the feed. Keep up the votin

puttin this back at the top for more votin

Dissonance: I gotta hand it to ya, you really elevated! I really like your flow this time. I like your punchlines!

Like an anorexic girl in a buffet line this kid can’t seem to finish what he-started
only reason your "legally ill" is cuz doctors diagnosed you "mentally retarted"
I like that alot! GOOD WORK!

Mixtape: You didn't do too good on this battle, the reason is, your punchlines were weak. Dissonance took this hands down cuz of his humor punch lines. Better luck next time!

Vote: Dissonance

Return the favor please!
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130955

Haha, tweeza...where were you at kid? lol I dropped this battle before we battled...

it's sad as hell...I de-elevated. Difference being that I pretty much keyed for our battle and that's just not something I'm good at.
thanks for the vote.

UPPIN...two more votes to finish this up ;)