MuSiC AnD SeX CoMbInEd....DeEp PiEcE
 

aiight check this out

the way she swept me into her world; winds, strings, percussive
acoustically, her voice musically moves til every fantasy touches
her body's the concerto, manifesting the most captivating poisons
a symphonic elixir carries her voice in vapor, even the sky moistens
this beautiful tune soothes so deep she enticed my staff to balloon
she's my acapella, so all variations of such themes are removed
feeling consumed, pulsations induced when my muse resumes
serenading me nude then our bodies fuse, developing sexual fugue
glissando, I'll motion gentle explosions over an ensemble of flesh
with 69 thematics of depth, I use my staff to deeply fondle her clef
as an entendre for sex, this prose exposed her angelic cadenza
make her organs orgasm till she hit the highest octave is my agenda
and while I'm stiff, gliding in slits, moans of pleasure provide the riff
she thought I was staccato, but my rhythm's almost too wide to fit
she's writhed her hips...I only brought full strings for you to pluck
so I gently force the chords, till both out spirits musically touch


~!1!~ feedback plz

u pre-write this shit? haha...nice though. i liked the concept. peace

ya im just dropping writtens right now dont feel like typin somethin up

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nice one man u must luv da chickk sum nice rhymes were thrown in.......good mixture n topic......i need sum honest votes on my battles plse

Yo, that shit was hot... Nice vocab, ya kept it flowin tha whole way through. it might jus be I'm a rook, but I can't find a real flaw in that verse. dope shit

Peace

good look on the feedback...and of course there isnt any flaws...we're talkin about flow intelligent here...never any flaws lol j/k uppin for more

Nice piece
strange as hell LOL
but nice piece i was feelin da concept and da way u done it nice dop

strange piece from a strange person lol....its all old shyt i used to write a while ago uppin for feedback

nice drop man i actually enjoyed that one most of these open mics are fuckin wack nice one though lookin forward to anutha pc

good look night...good to see open mics are appreciated