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damaged1 vrs.. verbal violence
aight here da rules
10-20 lines max no hater votes d/r votes first to 5 wins good luk~one~ |
checkin in ...
when is this due ? |
aight yo peep this
yo damaged1 is bout to get rampaged im the souljah that come wit da verbal guns// leavin damages to people who say they number 1// he new to rb so that means i can have a lil fun// murkin cats who think they stunned// my flows come phatter than big pun,fully auto spits that lyricly rip// into any prewrittin scripts,that the doo damage comes wit but his get horizontely flipped// vetical slips,he think his nose is broke but its only a lil blood that dont even drip// he come damaged like a blood on krip,verbals da one that plot lyrical hollow tips// battlin me hes gonna have a trip,he on my nuts like a jock// i aint no poperatzi but i know my raps u have to stalk// rewind ya weak flows and stop,as my hot rhymes inject to ya heart make ya drop// fully loaded wit murder lines someone please dile 911 for this kid he in damage call da cops// |
[size=1]ok check ...
I'll slay my punches to his brain wit verbs that'll leave em .drippin in sweat. ... Rippin organs and spittin verses thru his spine until each word is .rippin his neck. ... Your time is now to feel the pressure of a lyrical .king at his best. .... send .3 thru ur vest. and damage each splein thru your chest . ... I sunder greats, when I’m .microphone blessing. stop .stressing. n learn .ya lesson. ... I’ll .test em. his skill’s lessen when X-tRo blasts shots from a .Smith n Wesson. ... Chop you into .sediments. until My mass will last to blast and surpass your .intelligence. ... Challenge me? Should have delayed u'r actions like .speech impediments. ... It’s .evident. , when compared to mine your hardcore style is .irrelevant. ... I'll .scorch your team. and drag them acorss the patio until the .porch is clean. ... i dont result to verbal violence i just chop up your bars wit claws like wolverine. ... (his avatar) no turnin back to a beast like me , the time has come, ready smash you thugs .when-you-ready.. ... only way you'll beat me is with plastic gloves and .petroleum jelly. ... (finisher) without breakin a sweat i "evel ya hope like .crushed-pastors. ... i'll shit on Gev with irony like a toilette that flushed-backwards. ... (*drops the fuckin mic*) |
lol ok anywayz yall vote on dis right here aight~one~
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hmmm,cant really see the flow/format.
read this one it easier. ok check ... I'll slay my punches to his brain wit verbs that'll leave em .drippin in sweat. ... Rippin organs and spittin verses thru his spine until each word is .rippin his neck. ... Your time is now to feel the pressure of a lyrical .king at his best. .... send .3 thru ur vest. and damage each splein thru your chest . ... I sunder greats, when I’m .microphone blessing. stop .stressing. n learn .ya lesson. ... I’ll .test em. his skill’s lessen when X-tRo blasts shots from a .Smith n Wesson. ... Chop you into .sediments. until My mass will last to blast and surpass your .intelligence. ... Challenge me? Should have delayed u'r actions like .speech impediments. ... It’s .evident. , when compared to mine your hardcore style is .irrelevant. ... I'll .scorch your team. and drag them acorss the patio until the .porch is clean. ... i dont result to verbal violence i just chop up your bars wit claws like wolverine. ... (his avatar) no turnin back to a beast like me , the time has come, ready smash you thugs .when-you-ready.. ... only way you'll beat me is with plastic gloves and .petroleum jelly. ... (finisher) without breakin a sweat i "evel ya hope like .crushed-pastors. ... i'll shit on Gev with irony like a toilette that flushed-backwards. ... (*drops the fuckin mic*) sorry about that,it was rushed ... uppin for votes |
Damn, good job to both of yall.
damage ya punches was really hittin, an you had a nice flow an good structure. verbal, i kno you coulda did betta than this, ery thing was on point, its jus yo punches wasnt hittin as hard as his. but good job to both of yall. vote damaged1 |
thanks ... uppin for more votes
1-0 me |
i thought damaged was goin to take it but then he lost me aftr "stressin learn alesson" part sorry good start but you flow went down in flames soon as u took off...............verbal had some good punches but some of dat other shit i wasnt feelin
"on my nuts like a jock.....my raps u have to stalk"? but verbal gets my vote................ |
Snap. Hot battle. This is a tough one.
Verbal took a while to get warmed up, but once he did it held. Nice flow, good wordplay. Damaged started off hot but fell off a little. Although the speech impediments line was tight. Tough call. By technical K.O.: Verbal Violence |
aiight ...
1-2 him |
uppin this shit ...
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could yall uppin these votes there goin kinda slow if u vote i may return the favor holla athca boi verbal~one~
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return favor...
seriously the votes for verbal must be hate or d/r cuz seriously his shit was wack.. no structure or flow.. punches hit though... no hate at all i dont even know you... damaged came hard on personals, punches, multis and had ok flow and good structure My vote.. damaged1 |
Kind of a wack battle...anyway...verbal i hardly saw any punches in there and the flow was not good..damage u had some punches...& the personals in there...and the flow was aight...
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