~#~ Dissonance VS Tweeza ~#~
 

12 Lines
First to 5 wins
No feeding, recycling, biting, bitching
If you have a problem, discuss it like a man, not a bitch

Tweeza is spittin first.
Check in before you drop...
30 minute deadline once you've checked in.

Ok I'm checkin' in hunny! You ready for me to bring the heat?

Only if you be makin me ma chicken pot pie with it bitch!! lol I'm waitin for yeh

What a name, Dissonance, are you trying to sound scary?//
How long did it take you to find that name in the dictionary?//
What the fuck were you smokin' when you made that name//
"Callin' Tweeza out" Bitch you're just using my name in vain//
Check it kiddo, my rhymes are sick, they won't give ya a chance//
Thas why I'm giving ya 30 mins to write your shit in advance//
Don't dare to compare with me cuz I swear I'll tear ya into pieces//
I'll make my little sister eat you up like 'reese's pieces' for breakfast//
You're just wasting your time, youz the definition of a "true loser"//
You go around and try battlin' other geeks on the computer//
Fool, I'm top notch you'll want to be a part of me//
Try to battle back you disgraceful black wannabe//

I'm checkin in, but if I don't make it in the 30 minutes you can take the DQ.
Gettin kicked off this computer and the other one's in use...I'll try to get it
though. If not, enjoy the DQ and we'll do this again another time. Start the timer
I don't need a computer to jot this down...just to post it

Hmmm, you better post your verses, don't you dare chicken out! Make it fast! I'm not gonna take glory cuz I won by DQ. Don't pussy out...

There's no pussying out motha fucka...lol I really wasn't able to get to a computer. I don't care if you count DQ or not, I'll post a verse...give me 5-10 to type something up
never keystyled before, but i'll give it a try for you :)

Ok fine. Enough with the excuses. Hurry up man your time limit is expiring... Givin' ya few more mins. SPIT!

I aint never met you once or even read your rhymes,
and nothing I know makes you an enemy of mine
But I’ll ‘cut’ you to your ‘insides’ for mere pennies and dimes,
send you back to school have you ‘dissecting’ your rhymes
I’m dangerous, should have you raisin concern,
‘flip a bitch’ when you see me, try not to trip as ‘you(u) turn’,
It’s ‘wet’ so don’t forget, that tongue ‘slips’ and you burn,
ashes scattered to the winds, never to return
I’ll chew you full of holes like an apple with worms,
the same one I gave my teacher, for helpin me learn,
I have to kill her next, so I guess class is adjourned

Haha you got 11 lines. It's all good though. UPPIN' FOR VOTES!!!! PLEASE!

Tweeza got thisd one..he had harder punches than Diss plus the flow & the structure was aight..Dissonance your punches were ok but not as hard's as Tweeza's...

vote = Tweeza

tweeza has thiz handz down, everythin wuz good by D but T just kame to battle harda then D


vote=tweeza:thumbup:

Thx guys for the comments! Still uppin' for votes!

Uppin this again. I figured a loss...panick is not your friend...
lol anyways, finish this up

to me tweeza won dis battle dissonance that wasnt bad but u need to work on your punches