-NERVEZ v C.M.F.S
 

da battle :laugh:

IP: A88B F94E


here's mine...





nerves couldn't spit shit even if he deserved it
got the urge to throw verses but his nerves wont give the surges
perves on girls coz when he get real one he hurls
regurges herbs from the guy he just gave head to on the curb
he slurs a turd on the ground and says dinners served
rewords a verb to sound a way it's never been heard
rehearses the words from the hospital bed with his nurse
to hurt to reverse what's been lyrically said in his last curse
mutha fuckers be callin ya clinically dead when ya pass words
way ya talkin like ya instantly bread a wack nerd
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C.M.F.S vs NERVEZ
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C.M.F.S music

Flyweight

From: EastOaklandCalifornia
Status: Online
IP: 12CA C5E8


whoa i didnt see this battle till now...............here i go though................

Now here is a new bitch thats tryin to test my NERVEZ]
His name says it all C.ant M.ake F.emales S.quirt]

Hes a failure,a coward, and his flows have no style]
So i beat this bitch down like a red headed step child]

He claims to be a killa, but in his soul is a HOMO]
Battle me you comin up short like asians in black PORNOs]

So as this bitch spits a line nuthin but utter dissapointment]
It just wasnt meant to be like MIKE fukin wit Macullay Culkin]

This hoe buckles under pressure like a one leggd weight lifter]
C.M.F.S. is a wasted product like rollin Bammer up in a swisher]


C.ant M.ake da F.inal S.trech....

i fixd da battle now we just need sum votes...........

uppin 4 sum votes............................................. ..

votez.................. please vote,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Nevez won this piece...hardly saw any punches from CMFS..tha structure
goes to nervez since his was out side 'n' shit...*close yo shit nxt time*...
the vocab was a draw since i could read both verses good..but nervez got this one since he had harder punches than CMFS....peace....

can we geta vote on dis plse...................................

vote please............................................ .......................we need sum votes

more votes plse.............................................. ...

can we get sum votes plse.................................

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c.m.f.s:

nerves couldn't spit shit even if he deserved it
got the urge to throw verses but his nerves wont give the surges
^^2nd line stretched decent opener 5/10
perves on girls coz when he get real one he hurls
regurges herbs from the guy he just gave head to on the curb
^^stretched and forced weak punch 3/10
he slurs a turd on the ground and says dinners served
rewords a verb to sound a way it's never been heard
^^filler and weak 4/10
rehearses the words from the hospital bed with his nurse
to hurt to reverse what's been lyrically said in his last curse
^^good w/p bad punch 6/10
mutha fuckers be callin ya clinically dead when ya pass words
way ya talkin like ya instantly bread a wack nerd
^^weak closer good w/p 5/10

overall : 23/50 (46%)

nervez:

Now here is a new bitch thats tryin to test my NERVEZ]
His name says it all C.ant M.ake F.emales S.quirt]
^^good personal and punch 7/10
Hes a failure,a coward, and his flows have no style]
So i beat this bitch down like a red headed step child]
^^lol good shyt nice punch 7/10
He claims to be a killa, but in his soul is a HOMO]
Battle me you comin up short like asians in black PORNOs]
^^decent meta good punch 6/10
So as this bitch spits a line nuthin but utter dissapointment]
It just wasnt meant to be like MIKE fukin wit Macullay Culkin]
^^kinda weak 4/10
This hoe buckles under pressure like a one leggd weight lifter]
C.M.F.S. is a wasted product like rollin Bammer up in a swisher]
^^weak also 4/10

overall : 28/50 (56%)

vote: nervez

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c.m.f.s:

nerves couldn't spit shit even if he deserved it
got the urge to throw verses but his nerves wont give the surges
^^2nd line stretched decent opener 5/10
perves on girls coz when he get real one he hurls
regurges herbs from the guy he just gave head to on the curb
^^stretched and forced weak punch 3/10
he slurs a turd on the ground and says dinners served
rewords a verb to sound a way it's never been heard
^^filler and weak 4/10
rehearses the words from the hospital bed with his nurse
to hurt to reverse what's been lyrically said in his last curse
^^good w/p bad punch 6/10
mutha fuckers be callin ya clinically dead when ya pass words
way ya talkin like ya instantly bread a wack nerd
^^weak closer good w/p 5/10

overall : 23/50 (46%)

nervez:

Now here is a new bitch thats tryin to test my NERVEZ]
His name says it all C.ant M.ake F.emales S.quirt]
^^good personal and punch 7/10
Hes a failure,a coward, and his flows have no style]
So i beat this bitch down like a red headed step child]
^^lol good shyt nice punch 7/10
He claims to be a killa, but in his soul is a HOMO]
Battle me you comin up short like asians in black PORNOs]
^^decent meta good punch 6/10
So as this bitch spits a line nuthin but utter dissapointment]
It just wasnt meant to be like MIKE fukin wit Macullay Culkin]
^^kinda weak 4/10
This hoe buckles under pressure like a one leggd weight lifter]
C.M.F.S. is a wasted product like rollin Bammer up in a swisher]
^^weak also 4/10

overall : 28/50 (56%)

vote: nervez
was a pretty clos battle but nervez won that fair

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