plustwo vs. t-storm
 

aight you know the rules u done this before i'll spit first good luck.... peace :thumbup:

this is one to remember the day plustwo beat t-storm//
i'm all up on your ass just like a meteor swarm//
you granted my post for that im very grateful//
your gonna wish you were daed i'll make your life fatal//
i'm elevatin and you know it so you take advantage//
take it you can't see your at the dissadvantage//
this is a storm, and its a rainy day for you//
"plustwo beat t-storm" ill pay for that tatoo//
the final two lines this is where is where i have to make it hit//
ive just beat this guy down, he has got to submit//

aight i'm done i didn't have much time for that cos i gotta go and have ma tea lol...

ok
 

jus got on dawg.chk in wnt b long.............................................. .........................

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quickly murder this fool..15,..n plus-two all u learned at school?
gona crash,shoulda dun the math,this a blood bath..u suffering from whiplash
u a flyweight?..fuckin joke..u nowhere near my-weight
i hate manchester,only use is ya airport..coz u from rap should mi-grate
u talk a lotta shit..remove all ur irratation
tell u wot..i book u in 4 collonic-irrogation
i pump ma phneumatic..bang.. n choke this ashmatic
ur style needs drowning..catch u bitch tie ya mouth wit mastic






Awfull structure....fairly weak but enough i think.peace

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break down

opener:t
punches:t
flow:both
structure:t
wordplay:none
personals:both
closer:t
overall:t-storm

hmmm not a good battle sorry

weak punches an evrything else 4 both

v/ T-Storm his lines were a little better but up your structure

This battle wasn't the greatest but koo verses from each... t-storm got this battle with his verse being slightly more complex and for his use of vocabulary...

Plustwo- take the battle straight to him dawg, don't tell us about you, tell us about him... You'll get it next time...1

vote/ plus two because t-storm= banned:).............

crap wrong box dammit! oh well t had a better verse anyway:D

basically i felt plustwo was real weak and tstorm was decent but still cleaned up