devil advocate vs. drastic outlaw
 

ok outlaw here is da rules 10-15 lines
no hate votes
no d/r
we both check in when ur ready 2 battle
u go 1st
afta u've checked in u have 30 mins 2 spit ur verse

check in......................Have my verse in 30 min.

Dis cat dont want war but he steppin to tha plate//
By tha time u get ready to counter back it'll be too late//

You backin up tha tha devil you promotin' tha wrong side//
Tha deamon in you should be terrified go ahead duck-n-hide//

You got no chance, like a limbless swimmer//
Throw ya lyrics on my plate ill eat em up for dinner//

Straight up like a virgin dawg my lyrics is tight//
If it was darker tha skin tha betta tha skill........
........dis advocate would be white//

Nuff said its obvious you got murked//
You got beat pretty bad...Did it hurt?

^^^^Last line was corny but tight.
Good luck.

ight diz is my checkin & my verse

i got a fake azz outlaw pretending 2 b drastic
u know fuccin wit a lunatic like me thangz can turn tragic
like bin laden in foreign countries outside da us u should hide & run
like finished meat dat is in da oven i'll put a fork in u cuz ur done
i'll round circles round u like a point guard in b-ball does a center
i'm going 2 finish diz battle off rite cuz ur verse was just da beginning
i'm like Michael Jordan & ur just Scottie Pippen
ur just there 4 bounds, & assists, i'm there 2 score alot points & da court i rip
fucc diz cuz ur a homo thug just tryin 2 get u a name
but da funny thang bout it is 2 evabody in ur family ur just a fuccin shame

ight fucc it i'm uppin 4 votes dat battle of mine was kinda weak but i don't really care it'z cool

uppin for votes...........

This was a good battle cuz ya'll two are bout on tha same level. Ya'll both could elevate a little bit. I'm gun have to go wit drastic on this one. Devil's Advocate had more punches than drastic but drastic's punches were harder.

Vote - Drastic Outlaw

devil would of had this battle, but he fucked up tword tha end. He started not to rym, and it aint a flow if it aint rhyme'n. SoOo, Outlaw wasnt too much farther than you, u just had more punchlines, but u didnt rhyme, so i gotz to give my vote to outlaw. Peace.

Return tah favor, on my sig against whitey.

uppin for vote......

drastic won this battle .Advocate learn how to spell bfore u battle.....advocate had some decent punches but could have been better.he lost me wit his style n strucure.....drastic won from better punches.......battle could have been better......

waz up y'all i look at da battle & it was ok but both of ya need 2 elevate it make it mo hype next time but my vote goes 2 Advocate cuz he had mo punchlines dat connected hands down den Outlaw

flow goes 2 drastic
structure goes 2 Devil
wordplay goes 2 Devil
punches goes 2 Devil
so str8 up off of wut i observed from diz weak azz battle dat needs elevation dat devil advocate won

i give diz battle 4 thumbs down cuz it was sad & both of ya need 2 elevate but i did like a lil of wut drastic said bout my lyrics r tight like a virgin or sumthin like dat & devil like da parts of ur flow their r 5 lines out of it i like of urs
so my vote goes 2 devil cuz he had mo punches den u & clearly had betta structure

i was checking out diz battle & i lost interest in it cuz it was not dat good but drastic had a couple of catchy lines i like & devil had mo den a couple of catchy lines i like but all togetha u 2 need 2 elevate & perfect ur skills b4 battling again my vote goes 2 devil cuz he had betta structure & his wordplay or punches connected mo den urs drastic sorry