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DaCROZofHB 06-21-04 02:41 PM

DaCROZofHB(mafioso) vs.Mixtape(ill-legal jrs.)
 
ight crew battle

8-14 lines
no d/r
no crew
no hate votes

spit due by wednesday night

Wicked One 06-22-04 06:10 PM

DaCrozofHb.....haha this gonna be good....Checkin in.....

DaCROZofHB 06-24-04 02:34 PM

due by tonight...........................both were busy

DaCROZofHB 06-25-04 02:18 PM

aight check it

My lyrics Hit ya, Split ya, Make ya fuckin Knees Shake/
God dis nigga lost in "Brooklyn" like puffy, Fetchin CheeseCake/
Words make ya sound tuff, Dawg I got bullets to Test Ya/
How you gon play hard, when ya crew name is reppin Child Molestas/(illegal jrs.)
Cant get out my heat too much Pressure, Bitch gettin jumped more than Checkers/
I bet dis Noob is a fuckin wack, he packin Fake Gunz n Stuff/
Must got his sig MIXED up, cuz Rooks da ones Who get Made Fun of/
Talkin that hard slang, like you a RuffRyder from da Brooklyn Streets/
Homie, Puttin Hot Towels in ya pants is yo idea of Packin Heat/

Wicked One 06-25-04 03:55 PM

ayo had this battle to be closed oh well i'll drop a verse in like 25 min.....

Wicked One 06-25-04 04:47 PM

Leavin' his mind cluttered smack this dumb motherfucker…
Until is brain tissue disitigrates with a quick uppercutter…
And his cranium shakes and the blood vessels erupt and his brain shudders…
Sit back watch me spit another and rip on others…
Cause Mixtape is continuously reckon ya like Ellazies with a studder(wreckin' ya)…
You're a gay nusance,You're completely useless…
I'll leave you bruised and contused bitch And strangled til your neck looks like a tooth pick…
You're about to lose quick then even quicker to jump on the Don’s dick…
I'll Make my two fists…
Face your cheek stupid..iniate the beat and make you face the music…
I could spit keystyles and rap forever,I'll slap and sever…
Cause the truth is explicits content can't top me like a christian rap record…
I'am steal the breath right from your lungs till you're not left wit life…
I'm the ill kid watch me bless mics i destroy dudes in text fights…
You got superpowers?!If so U must be an ex-man like a fuckin' transvestite…

Wicked One 06-25-04 07:21 PM

Uppin ~1~....Vote People.....Leave A Link if ya want.......

God 06-25-04 08:03 PM

damn son mixtape merked this dacrozofhb...

Mixtape
damn son your verse was hot.....punchlines were really good they were hitten really good....personals were really hitten hard and were really making there mark...multies were hot and they were really in the correct order...Structure was alittle off at times but overall you merked this cat easily...

Dacroz
damn... son your verse was weak ass hell.. you had hardly had any good punchlines that i was finding interesting... you verse was to simple... cheescake .. with shake ... damn you really need to up your vocab.... multies were decent... structure was decent ....

but overall i gotta give this one to mixtape
VOTE=mixtape

Cocaine 06-25-04 08:07 PM

alright good battle.. mixtape ur structure was off... u had an ok flow but ur punches were much better... croz you had ok flow ur structure was off too.. ur punches were aight.. soo vote goes to mixtape

Keith Moon 06-25-04 08:23 PM

hmmm well close battle but Mix won he had better vocab I was impressed. Your punches hit hard 2 good job son

For$akeN 06-25-04 09:26 PM

DaCROZofHB's DROP:

My lyrics Hit ya, Split ya, Make ya fuckin Knees Shake/
God dis nigga lost in "Brooklyn" like puffy, Fetchin CheeseCake/
AIGHT PUNCH NOT THE GREATEST THO 6/10
Words make ya sound tuff, Dawg I got bullets to Test Ya/
How you gon play hard, when ya crew name is reppin Child Molestas/
Cant get out my heat too much Pressure, Bitch gettin jumped more than Checkers/
THIS WAS OK USED A PERSONAL TO HIS EX CREW...... 6/10
I bet dis Noob is a fuckin wack, he packin Fake Gunz n Stuff/
Must got his sig MIXED up, cuz Rooks da ones Who get Made Fun of/
UH WHAT DA FUCK DOES THIS MEAN??? 5.5/10
Talkin that hard slang, like you a RuffRyder from da Brooklyn Streets/
Homie, Puttin Hot Towels in ya pants is yo idea of Packin Heat/
IT WAS AIGHT AT BEST 6.5/10

OVERALL: 6/10///60%

MIXTAPE'S DROP:

Leavin' his mind cluttered smack this dumb motherfucker…
Until is brain tissue disitigrates with a quick uppercutter…
IT WAS AIGHT NOTHING SPECIAL 6.5/10
And his cranium shakes and the blood vessels erupt and his brain shudders…
Sit back watch me spit another and rip on others…
Cause Mixtape is continuously reckon ya like Ellazies with a studder...
NICE ONE FEELING IT 7/10
You're a gay nusance,You're completely useless…
I'll leave you bruised and contused bitch And strangled til your neck looks like a tooth pick…
You're about to lose quick then even quicker to jump on the Don’s dick…
NICE AGAIN 7.5/10
I'll Make my two fists…
Face your cheek stupid..iniate the beat and make you face the music…
NICE AGAIN 7.5/10
I could spit keystyles and rap forever,I'll slap and sever…
Cause the truth is explicits content can't top me like a christian rap record…
LIKING IT A LOT 8/10
I'am steal the breath right from your lungs till you're not left wit life…
I'm the ill kid watch me bless mics i destroy dudes in text fights…
You got superpowers?!If so U must be an ex-man like a fuckin' transvestite…
HAHA NICE BEST PUNCH IN THE DROP IN MY OPINION 8.5/10

OVERALL: 7.5/10///75%

VOTE GOES TO: MIXTAPE (YOU RIPPED IT NICE DROP)

Wicked One 06-25-04 11:46 PM

Uppin~2~...Vote People Just 1 more vote...Leave a link if ya want....

Gods son 06-26-04 12:50 PM

iight ...it was a very tough battle..

Flow: Mix

Punchline: Mix

Personals: Dacroz

Metas: Dacroz

Multis: Mix

Vocab: Mix..

Keep elevatin...vote = mixtape


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