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-Body COunt- vs. femcee
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Aight.. hEre it goes...
She speaks on my 5 losses, not criticism for construction// But in this function i'll hand you the BLUEPRINT to yo destruction// My eruption known to reck and ravage yo reproduction// System and suck yo fat ass thin and numb like lypo-suction// I aint gone make this about gender, Ima do you a service// And say fuck spittin bars ima verbally break yo cervix//(could mean uterus) And a cervix is also, BP's finest hoe please// Ima rhyme Chiropractor spin yo neck 303 degrees// You're thinkin you the hottest femcee, battlin noobie dykes// But when you reach my status then lets see what yo loss records lookin like// Cuz in this race to be the best, the judges need to wave the checkered// Flag, and close yo lips noob while i add yo first loss to yo record// |
*And a cervix is also yo neck...............................my bad i forgot a word.......
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notice the numbers beside his name to indicate the mass amounts...(not available) ...his verse cud be the next habbitat for Sesami's Oscar the Grouch /1 (garbage) i otta leave these 2 bars and let tha voters take closure... ...after digesting those text, yor minds not your only area in need of make over /2 how many bodies have you layed down back in San Francisco?...(from: frisco) ...youLL fail yor plot to add another, "damn plan...this close (pinches fingers) /3 yor spit is like saliva in a baloon, its my pet peive and you blew it... ... Quote:
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Yo, This Was A Close Battle But Body Count Came Out On Top
Body Count-punches Hit A Little Harder, Made More Sense To, Nice Flow. Femcee-i Really Liked Yall To, Body Jus Hit A Little Itty Bitty Harder, But U Koo. Return Da Favor Vote On Ma Battle Wit Theone. |
Body Count= You had a nice use of vocabulary. Ya flow was goin well. And ya punches were good.
Femcee= You did ok. Some of ya punches was ok but they didnt hit hard enough. You didnt get my vote in this one cuz he beat you wit vocabulary. |
Damn dis battle was vicious. Body Count had dis one all da way. Not nockin Femcee, but she was tight too.
Body Count dat "My eruption known to reck and ravage yo reproduction// System and suck yo fat ass thin and numb like lypo-suction//" was tight. Flow 7.5/10 structure 7/10 Punches was tight overall 7.5 or a 8 Femcee flow/6.5/10 punches was aight Vote goes to Body Count look up ma battle Plustwo VS Me |
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Body Count
structure was pretty good...flow was good for the most part...u had some metas...wordplay was good at times...some of ur punches connected...personals were pretty good... femcee structure was ok...whats wit the big font though?...flow was on target...u had a few metas...ur wordplay was played...really none of ur punches connected...no good personals... Overall both had a good structure and flow...both had some metas...body count had better wordplay...more punches...and better personals...so basing off of that...body count gets my vote... VOTE - BODY COUNT |
Body Count...yo structure was pretty good...i saw that u had some metas in there 'n' shit..tha flow was aight...you punches were hard & they landed...& yo wordplay was good at that...Femcee...yo structure was ok..i saw that you had some metas in there..yo flow was pretty good...& yo didn't have any good personals in there...Body Count took this one becuz his punches was betta, he had wordplay in there..his personals was good...and tha flow was on target..BoDy CoUnT gets my vote...
vote = -BoDy CoUnT- |
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