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damaged1 06-21-04 07:14 PM

damaged1 vs The JaCka
 
10barz
no dr/ crew votes
no recyclin
due in 30min...

he says he's no joke ...,so we bout to see.

damaged1 06-21-04 07:38 PM

Mass-attacks to rid-his-heart I don't get his art but he'd .better practice. …
i'll hex-his-stature cuz he stays on Jocks more than .letterman jackets. …
this herb-is-.backword.s, Phat the apex slay text while jak .makin it wack. …
his afiliation with with 'divinity' makes him Michle jackson's 'insperation'. …
he saw it comeing but he let go and gave him a 'grim' insineration. …
This Kids Verse Is More Declinded Then Flat-Chested Bitches Flashing, . …
Your Whole Verse Went In A Downward Slope, Like Ski-Resorts In Aspen. …
Your Too Conceited, Brown-Nosed From Having Your Head So Far Up Ya Ass,. …
ProneBlast, No Class, Can't Surpass, When I Spit Verbs In Third-Past. …
This Cat Probably Paid Every Person To Win, Yo prophet Stop Da Cheats,. …
This Cats Reputation Is Like Fire Drills, All Talk and No Heat. …
spare me ya drought-verse embarrased-but-proud-first cuz he's in a bout. …
type ya flow's off of Jay Z's first album, cuz u winnin is a 'Reasonable Doubt'. …
He kicks more "throwback" concepts than old-school replica Jordans. …
Underrated and cats still "sleep on your shit" like "narcoleptics on toilets". …
so unlike you and your 'lost' ways, my raps and ryhmes will never fail me. …
and you could never be the shit if you were droped in toilets daly. …

The JaCka 06-21-04 07:43 PM

Call It *Premeditated* The Way I Planned-The-Pressure
You 'S'uck Ya Forehead Wears The Brand-Of-Sketches(S)
You Playin-Newbie? Niqqa Battlin Me Is Blatant-Cruelty
When Ya Rhymes Are *More Ass* Than Jamaican-Booty
Strangled-And-Choked I Make You Abandon-This-Post
I'm Bout To *Hang This Bitch* I'm Demandin-The-Rope
You Stupid-Fool-Kid You Must Be Fuckin Ruthless-To-Bitch
Ya*Punches Just White Caps* Mines A Cruiseship-Movement
Watch My *Verbal Sprays Of Gernades* Slice-You-Nigga
Guarentee I Leave Ya *Head Shot* Like Ya High-School-Picture
Put The *Hammer To Ya Lungs* And A Nail-In-Ya-Coughin (Coffin)(1)
When Ya *Puches So Soft-Kid* You Leave A Trail-Of-Ya-Cotton
Frailed-Till-Ya-Rotten And Slaughter The Rest-Of-You-Faggot
I'm Next-To-The-Baddest Make You Suffer From Perpetual-Sadness
I Got *Lyrical Tips* And They Only Stay Hollow-Festivals
Only Way U *Say U Got Balls* Is If You Swallowed-Testicals
How Can Rap Battle Heads Handle This Faggots-Wackness
I Beat You *While Holdin 'Back'* Like A Chiropractic-Practice(2)

(1) Coughin...Get It...Stomach..Lungs

(2) Chiropractors Work With Backs.


Uppin On Vote.....

LaTiNKiTTeN 06-21-04 10:30 PM

Mass-attacks to rid-his-heart I don't get his art but he'd .better practice. …
WHY DO U HAVE PERIODS IN UR VERSE? U EITHER HAVE KEYBOARD PROBLEMS OR A STRAGE ASS WAY OF SPITTING....I WASNT FEELING IT
i'll hex-his-stature cuz he stays on Jocks more than .letterman jackets. …
I KNOW I HEARD THIS CONTENT BEFORE
this herb-is-.backword.s, Phat the apex slay text while jak .makin it wack. …
U PUTTIN TOO MUCH INTO ONE LINE
his afiliation with with 'divinity' makes him Michle jackson's 'insperation'. …
he saw it comeing but he let go and gave him a 'grim' insineration. …
I GET THE FIRST LINE,DONT GET THE 2ND PART BUT I WASNT FEELIN IT
This Kids Verse Is More Declinded Then Flat-Chested Bitches Flashing, . …
Your Whole Verse Went In A Downward Slope, Like Ski-Resorts In Aspen. …
BOTH ARE PLAYED,I'VE HEARD BOTH BEFORE
Your Too Conceited, Brown-Nosed From Having Your Head So Far Up Ya Ass,. …
ProneBlast, No Class, Can't Surpass, When I Spit Verbs In Third-Past. …
BROWN NOSED...HEARD IT N I DONT LIKE IT...THE REST IS JUST MULTIES
This Cat Probably Paid Every Person To Win, Yo prophet Stop Da Cheats,. …
This Cats Reputation Is Like Fire Drills, All Talk and No Heat. …
WOW,THIS IS JUST STRAIGHT PLAYED SON.........
spare me ya drought-verse embarrased-but-proud-first cuz he's in a bout. …
type ya flow's off of Jay Z's first album, cuz u winnin is a 'Reasonable Doubt'. …
WEAK ATTEMPT AT WORDPLAY
He kicks more "throwback" concepts than old-school replica Jordans. …
ALL THROWBACK LINES ARE PLAYED
Underrated and cats still "sleep on your shit" like "narcoleptics on toilets". …
THIS IS PROLLY UR BEST LINE
so unlike you and your 'lost' ways, my raps and ryhmes will never fail me. …
and you could never be the shit if you were droped in toilets daly. …
U OVERUSING THE "SHIT" CONCEPT....U HAVE TO BE VERY CREATIVE NOT TO BE PLAYED WITH ANYTHING THAT HAS "SHIT" IN IT......

I DIDNT FEEL THE VERSE CUZ THERE WERE A LOT OF PLAYED CONCEPTS....WAY TOO MANY....



Call It *Premeditated* The Way I Planned-The-Pressure
You 'S'uck Ya Forehead Wears The Brand-Of-Sketches(S)
I GET IT,BUT I WASNT FEELIN IT THAT MUCH
You Playin-Newbie? Niqqa Battlin Me Is Blatant-Cruelty
When Ya Rhymes Are *More Ass* Than Jamaican-Booty
AIGHT NOT THAT HARD HITTING,CUZ I'VE HEARD SIMILAR BOOTY LINES BEFORE
Strangled-And-Choked I Make You Abandon-This-Post
I'm Bout To *Hang This Bitch* I'm Demandin-The-Rope
....NOT HARD HITTING
You Stupid-Fool-Kid You Must Be Fuckin Ruthless-To-Bitch
Ya*Punches Just White Caps* Mines A Cruiseship-Movement
DONT GET THIS
Watch My *Verbal Sprays Of Gernades* Slice-You-Nigga
Guarentee I Leave Ya *Head Shot* Like Ya High-School-Picture
I LIKE THIS..GOOD LINE
Put The *Hammer To Ya Lungs* And A Nail-In-Ya-Coughin (Coffin)(1)
DECENT WORD PLAY
When Ya *Puches So Soft-Kid* You Leave A Trail-Of-Ya-Cotton
HMMMM....IT WAS OK
Frailed-Till-Ya-Rotten And Slaughter The Rest-Of-You-Faggot
I'm Next-To-The-Baddest Make You Suffer From Perpetual-Sadness
NOTHIN THERE
I Got *Lyrical Tips* And They Only Stay Hollow-Festivals
Only Way U *Say U Got Balls* Is If You Swallowed-Testicals
THIS WAS OK
How Can Rap Battle Heads Handle This Faggots-Wackness
I Beat You *While Holdin 'Back'* Like A Chiropractic-Practice(2
UR BEST LINE...I LIKE THIS

OK,FIRST GUY HAD ONE DECENT LINE,THE REST WERE WEAK OR PLAYED...2ND GUY HAD A COUPLE OF DECENT PUNCHES,SOME WORDPLAY....SO VOTE=JACKA

The JaCka 06-22-04 09:18 AM

LaTiNKiTTeN not to knock you, but read lines over to undastand shit some shit was common sence, like white caps. and when u said nothin was there it was just a bar of multies not always a punch...

Archeologist 06-22-04 09:32 AM

Punches..:..Jacka
Enjoyment..:.. neither realy..
Opener..:..Damaged1
Closer..:..Jacka
Overall..:..Jacka

I will poll when you vote on my battle Rascal 'vs' Potential its only fair..
pz.

Archeologist 06-22-04 09:33 AM

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128964
Link if you need it..

Gods son 06-22-04 10:18 AM

tHAT WAS A GOOD BATTLE...bIG UPS FOR BOTH OF YOU CATS..NOW LETS BREAK IT DOWN..

mY FAV VS FROM DMAGED1...He kicks more "throwback" concepts than old-school replica Jordans. …
Underrated and cats still "sleep on your shit" like "narcoleptics on toilets".

mY FAV LINE FROM jACKA...Put The *Hammer To Ya Lungs* And A Nail-In-Ya-Coughin (Coffin)(1)
When Ya *Puches So Soft-Kid* You Leave A Trail-Of-Ya-Cotton



FLOWS WERE ABOUT THE SAME TO ME..BOTH HAD METAS AND MUTLIS..nOBODY REALLY HAD PERSONALS BUT IT ALL CAME DOWN TO THE PUNCHES I THINK jACKA CAME A LITTLE HARDER. B/C THE PUNCHES LANDED TYPE NICE,,,...

The JaCka 06-22-04 10:23 AM

preciate the votes, uppin on this shit niggas.....

Guranteed 06-22-04 10:57 AM

Punches-jacka
Opener-jacka
Multis-jacka
Closer-damaged1

V/jacka

damaged1 06-22-04 11:01 AM

...good battle jack, keep it up ...

BostonLyricist 06-22-04 07:45 PM

yo that shit was crazy....nice wit it yall both have unique styles

yo damage at first was rippin kidd..but then you got lost in your flow it seems
you was sounding more of like an encyclopedia than an mc

jacka reped like he always does punches was on fire but ive seen you do bettah

vote........jacka

Sik Wit It 06-22-04 07:51 PM

Damn....nice verse both of ya..

Flow - The JaCka, was structured better, which made it flow better

Punches - JaCka took this one...just str8 out had harder punches than Damage so JaCka took this 1...

Multies - Damage took this one...had a couple of words that rhymed

Overall - The JaCka took this one...just had harder punches, tha flow was betta and it all came together 'n' shit...

v/ The JaCka


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