Mimesis vs. TheOne
 

10 lines
house rules
u spit first

good luck...

aight man, gl to u too

Thiz bitch thinkz he kan take on the greatest
Ni¢¢a, wutcha settin thiz up fo man? ur the lastest
An onea tha dumest if u think u akn take such a superior
Figure, i'm tha best an ur nuthin, to any1 ur inferior
So i'm gonna make thiz quik like i would against any brave soul
Ur no EmCee..not even half as good, u ain't got nuthin unda control
Everythinz scrambled an u have no idea wut to do...u panic
Here an ther..lookin at the dictionary fo rhymes, ur sunk worse then the Titanic
Ur dun....down to ur newest an deepest low.....do u no?
That ur soul has left?that ur in the graces of God?no ur not, ur eatin by hellz crow

aight i dunno where that putz me or if it wuz any good but gl anyway..peace man spit it good

aight...

check this shit out...yo, yo...

as i rack the wit, ur wack so quit...and in this battle ima smack ur spit
but we do have one thing in common...cause we both laugh at ur shit!
i stack the hits...while sockin this gay, bitch im just blockin your spray
and fuck your whole biography bitch...
...we like u better when ur locked away!**
i rock ur say...this fuck couldnt be hated more if he stole a mans wife
but fuck AIMin at him, hes clearly lyin...
...cause he'll be a rap cripple his whole damn life!***
u should just roll, and stand in knifes...cause fuck u, ima smash this man

and at least i can agree wit u here...
...ur verse belongs in the fuckin trash can!
im past standin...i can rhyme on my knees and beat u, bitch u aint tight
cause hows he gonna be good at battles...
...when the dumbass cant even spell it right!****

*in his sig he has this --> :laugh2: which is pointing at his posts
**in his profile, under biography, he says "Rappin setz me free"
***his AIM sn is CripTonite123
****in his sig, he spells battles, "battlez"

now uppin for votes...

UPPIN # 1 !!!!

lets get some votes in here...

...leave a link and ill return the favor wit an honest vote...

UPPIN # 2 !!!!

god damn...

...what does it take to get some votes around here...

UPPIN # 3 !!!!

ive voted on at least 5 battles...y does no one return the favor?...

...just vote on this battle yo...

Blah at TheOne's verse. Wack as fuck. Sorry, but your punches were weak man. You should work on everything, especially your flow. Anyway Mimesis came much harder here. His punches were much better than TheOne's. That's about it.

V/Mimesis

mY vote goes to mimesis cuz his punches hit harder plus he had personal shit...Also his multi opener wasnt half bad...
THe ONe... your spit seemed like you didnt think about what you wrote... It was too simple try fuckin around wit word play a lil...1


-bODy CoUNT- vs. femcee

theone: I feel you didn't come hard and your punches just weren't hitting
flow was not that good, aight wordplay, horrible vocab, originality was
decent nothing special at all........

Mimesis: ok I feel you won this because your punches hit harder than theone
flow was nice, vocab had some big words to it, origninality was aight........
nice drop in my opinion...

vote goes to: Mimesis

^^aight...thanx for the votes...

UPPIN # 4 !!!!

cmon...end this battle yo...

UPPIN # 5 !!!!

3-0 me...

...lets get some more votes in here yo...

aight easily this goes to memisis..i didnt feel theones verse that much at all.. was no structure lol.. no metas, no complexity at all... but keep tryin u bound to get better..

memisi ur verse was coo.. but the way it flowed mad it have alot a filler.. and ur verse structure needs some work on how its typed up and what not... makes it easier on the eyes =P.. and the lines were a bit stretched, but other than that, it was a nice lil verse.. big ups to both of you...

v/mem

this battle was way one sided mimesis got this one in tha bag easily...
he had better punchlines..better personals ...better multies... nicer structure..
basically everything... the one you really need to elevate alot kid your verse were simple as hell and some of the lines werent makin anysense...punchlines were really lame and they werent hitten mimesis...personals ...well there were no personals'...
and that why i gotta give this battle to mimesis he had tight punchlines..and nice personals....overall i really enjoyed reading mimesis verse..but damn theone your verse was wack as hell you really need to elevate alot sorry...

vote=mimesis