DON(mafia)<<VS>>Young Smirf(ROD)
 

aight 10-14 lines
no cheating
no feeding
no hate/crew/dr votes
verses due by midnight tonite the 21'st
good luck
i forgot u cant even battle in elevated yet but verses still due by 12 tonite so chek in

checkn who am i battlein

ur not in this battle go bak to our forum and chek who ur battelin and u set it up wit them this battle has nutin to do wit u

ooooooooooooooooopppps mah bad.

your a fake...you even spent your money to make your title HEAVYWEIGHT...
your crew and gas prices have somethin in common....theyre both overrate...
this boy never gets pussy thats why hes named after blue...
you show up just like your sig...nobody notices you...
Young's a disgrace to this site...youll never get past 5 battles...
Smirf gets shaken then chokes...like a baby playin wit small rattles...
i got an idea for your crews sig...to make your names audible...
"please can you :help: ...cause we're all so horrible"...
smirfs on late at night...so he cant meet me...
either that or hes busy jerkin off to DP...

you have till midnight tonite or else your bein dq'd

aight ill give u to midnight tomoro and im not playin ill get u dq'd if u dont drop by then so drop asap

i'ma spit tommorow aight. Then i'ma hit u up when i log in to tell you that i'ma bout to spit.

ight i'ma spit today. I'm checkin' in right now........

The Don needs to type in a few extra lines//
call his crew mafioso cuz he say Godfather a whole bunch of times//
And yeah i changed my title cuz my weight is heavey//
you a fag when you see me your dick is like a rock like chevy//
Talkin' bout i pre-write... nigga this is off the top of my head//
like my dick was when i got dat hore you call your momma in bed//
and "Don" this is Ride Or Die so we won't back down your crew....
is supposed to be the mafia but we got a hit on you//
don't fuck wit us we come in the middle of night like santa clause//
your crew is the definition of bitches scratch female dogs//
and i'm like biggie motherfuckers i'll kick through your door//
after R.O.D. win you'll be wantin' a recount like Al Gore//
And Young Smirf and R.O.D. we got weight so we heavy//
the last line in his verse that nigga probably tried it already...

aight if i can even vote i think i got 20 post's

flow~both
punches~ima give it to don
personal's~don
vocab~niether both kept it simple
overall vote~don

don i was feelin more then smirf smirf man dont talk bout your dick so much though u both did good though

Vote disqualified for suspected d/r. Crew vote deleted

your a fake...you even spent your money to make your title HEAVYWEIGHT...
your crew and gas prices have somethin in common....theyre both overrate...8/10 haha
this boy never gets pussy thats why hes named after blue...
you show up just like your sig...nobody notices you...8/10 good rhymin scheme
Young's a disgrace to this site...youll never get past 5 battles...
Smirf gets shaken then chokes...like a baby playin wit small rattles...3/10 u coulddobet
i got an idea for your crews sig...to make your names audible...
"please can you ...cause we're all so horrible"...9/10 yo best punch
smirfs on late at night...so he cant meet me...
either that or hes busy jerkin off to DP...4/10 good stucture DON n nice blows

The Don needs to type in a few extra lines//
call his crew mafioso cuz he say Godfather a whole bunch of times//4/10 good punch
And yeah i changed my title cuz my weight is heavey//
you a fag when you see me your dick is like a rock like chevy//2/10 too many "likes"
Talkin' bout i pre-write... nigga this is off the top of my head//
like my dick was when i got dat hore you call your momma in bed//6/10 funny pers.
and "Don" this is Ride Or Die so we won't back down your crew....
is supposed to be the mafia but we got a hit on you//5/10 desent
don't fuck wit us we come in the middle of night like santa clause//
your crew is the definition of bitches scratch female dogs//5/10 nice crew diss
and i'm like biggie motherfuckers i'll kick through your door//
after R.O.D. win you'll be wantin' a recount like Al Gore//4/10 nice
And Young Smirf and R.O.D. we got weight so we heavy//
the last line in his verse that nigga probably tried it already...3/10 u said weight rhyme already
i got it 32 to 29 in favor of Don. better scructure n lyrics no hate
can i get sum honest votes plse.........HOLLA

I think that Don should of practiced a lil harder and that smirf held it down. his verse was a lil better and i liked his punches. v= young smirf

^^wasnt even explained and it sounds like bullshit to me but it dont matter uppin

Don ripped this fucka with ease,,

Punches:.Don
Personals:.Don
Opener:.Don *dope*
Closer:.ermmmm Don
Overal:.Don Ripped this kid like paper..

If you want my poll vote..
vote on this..
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128964
pz.