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Åtticus vs. da pimp
10-15 lines
no recycling no biting |
my premonition is for you to STOP, drop and roll real quick//
before i lite that fire on your azz like irritated steroidswhen you shit// to spit at you is not worth my time I'd rather nibble on your sister's clit// or smack your mami's azz from the back while I chew on her tit// You're insane, to wanna battle, I should call 9-1-1// have you nothing to say? Are you speachless? or is your mouth full of my cum?// You're a Kinkos kinda rapper, who portrays a thug...do you hear laughter?// if copied lyrics were what I'm after, I'll logon and listen to Napster// I'm done, and you are finished, throw in the towel before you begin// Since Biggie Smalls won't be using them, I bet he has some lyrics to lend// |
uppin for votes
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(Nice And Easy To Start Out)
I PROVE-MORE-POINTS Then Eistien Gettin Seazed For Steriods-Crimes... And Have Ya Lose-More-JOINTS Then Whitney Gettin On-Airlines// My Words-Dispurse Like A Hurse-To-Verse To Shake-Mouths... And You'll Never Equally Verse-Spirts Of My Caliburs-Girth Until SUBWAY-Helps// (Turn It Up Alittle) No-One Calls Kid A "PIMP" Yet He Claims To "Have A Foot In The-Hoes"... But The Only Time His HOES-RUN Is When He's Switching From Drag To Some-Cloths// This-Bitch Isnt My "TYPE",Couldnt Even FUCK-Me If He-Tried While Screwin-The-Board... And His-SPITS Only BREAK THREW After He Gets Off His Nees An Shouts YOU-GOT-SERVED!// Wants Nothing-But To Be Pimp, Like 50-Cent... But Unless He's Suming-Up His Life Savings He'll Never Reach-What-Ferraris-Set// Got Kinda Board... Sorry, But Whatever... Vote Up People... ~One~ |
still uppin for votes
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this was an ok battle for both of you... nice spit all around... it was pretty even up until the closer.. i think Pimp had the better closer so thats why imma give this one to him. atticus no hate to you bro, you both pretty much tied on everything (altho i liked atticus's sructure a little more) both had ok punches and personals and a multi or two... but this one goes to pimp on da closer...
VOTE- PIMP check this out.... HOT BATTLE http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131036 |
nice battle..but atticus got dis one, more complex and harder hittin punches, ur lines were a little stretched but ur vocab made up for dat..pimp nice verse u need to come more complex and wit harder punches
v/atticus |
nice battle but only one can win
personals=pimp wordplay=atticus punchlines=atticus structure=atticus vote=atticus |
haha whoever voted on pimp was rpolly a favor vote i mean fuck he was wack
and atticus came hard with everything v/atticus |
Yo i'm goin wit Atticus on this. He had better punches and lyrics but his structure was a little skewed. Da Pimp yo verse was straight though. Vote - Atticus
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Da Pimp:
my premonition is for you to STOP, drop and roll real quick// before i lite that fire on your azz like irritated steroidswhen you shit// -good opener... to spit at you is not worth my time I'd rather nibble on your sister's clit// or smack your mami's azz from the back while I chew on her tit// -see this kinda shit, yo mama jokes and rhymes is how you lose a battle You're insane, to wanna battle, I should call 9-1-1// have you nothing to say? Are you speachless? or is your mouth full of my cum?// -911 and my cum... they dont flow You're a Kinkos kinda rapper, who portrays a thug...do you hear laughter?// if copied lyrics were what I'm after, I'll logon and listen to Napster// -stretched lines, would hae been a good punch but it didnt flow I'm done, and you are finished, throw in the towel before you begin// Since Biggie Smalls won't be using them, I bet he has some lyrics to lend// -streched lines again...closure gets 6/10 Comments: many streched lines which made you flow off, your creativity was nothing beyond basic, and your punches didnt hit for the majority of the verse... Atticus: (Nice And Easy To Start Out) I PROVE-MORE-POINTS Then Eistien Gettin Seazed For Steriods-Crimes... And Have Ya Lose-More-JOINTS Then Whitney Gettin On-Airlines// -beautiful opener... keep that up My Words-Dispurse Like A Hurse-To-Verse To Shake-Mouths... And You'll Never Equally Verse-Spirts Of My Caliburs-Girth Until SUBWAY-Helps// -mouths/helps...?? nice multis though (Turn It Up Alittle) No-One Calls Kid A "PIMP" Yet He Claims To "Have A Foot In The-Hoes"... But The Only Time His HOES-RUN Is When He's Switching From Drag To Some-Cloths// -nice punch...nice creativity and a good structured line This-Bitch Isnt My "TYPE",Couldnt Even FUCK-Me If He-Tried While Screwin-The-Board... And His-SPITS Only BREAK THREW After He Gets Off His Nees An Shouts YOU-GOT-SERVED!// -punch was decent... this lacked structure and vocab Wants Nothing-But To Be Pimp, Like 50-Cent... But Unless He's Suming-Up His Life Savings He'll Never Reach-What-Ferraris-Set// -decent...closure gets 7/10 comments: the majority if not all of you verse flowed nicely, had some tip punches in there, and had a solid structure.... tally up: Da Pimp had a decent verse all together and had a few good lines and a few bad ones... Atticus had a pretty good verse, had nice punches and good flow, a little creativity and had an original structure to 'em.... ~Fem~ return the favor, i got a few battles open vote: Atticus |
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